It Must Be Me

Discussion in 'Black Teenagers - Teenz Exprezzed!' started by soulful2006, Apr 26, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2005
    Messages:
    677
    Likes Received:
    16
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +18
    Some days I wish I knew what it is that makes the world thw way it is
    why all of my girlfriends are suddenly having kids
    all the decisions that they make make no sense and I'm wrong if I say something
    I want to be bettter than the situation I'm in right now
    I'm living and fighting to survive
    to become a sucess is all I desire
    I don't want to foorget where I come from or turn my back on my friends
    I just want a new beginning
    Is that so much to ask for especially when I'm making the effort to be better
    but when i see what happenin to my brothers and sisters I realize
    the desire to be more seems simple so i figure
    It Must Be Me
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 5, 2004
    Messages:
    303
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    wow! this is well written, why don't you send it to the poetry forums to share your talents with other talented poets???
    i love it though...

    much love,
    plain.
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Stay focused on your heart's desire and you will succeed.
     
  4. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 29, 2004
    Messages:
    414
    Likes Received:
    3
    Ratings:
    +4
    Well said

    First-of-all girl let me make a clap for you;you have the romantic flow within you.I agree with plainrhythm;try to have a look in poetry forum.
    I have the same problem and it's a pleasure for me to see that i'm no more alone!I think that the more we are,stronger we'll be! :donttell: but i wanna see more black american like you and me,those who wanna see a change in the society!Don't give up and be strong
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2005
    Messages:
    677
    Likes Received:
    16
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +18
    Thank you it is a beautiful thing to see someone feling the way I feel. I just want to makw my world the best it can be. I see no harm or trouble in that hopefully the rest of the world will catch on to that and if not I have no other choice but to be me and that's it. ;) :fyi: :thinking:
     
Loading...