Black Poetry : It Lays Deep Within Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha, Sep 11, 2004.

  1. Sha

    Sha New Member MEMBER

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    This was written by me in 97 and I thought I'd just share it with the family :)


    A special feeling lay's deep within me...
    A magic feeling I never felt,
    A smile that comes from within my soul,
    A feeling I never had...
    Something's magical has come over me,
    A love I never saw...
    And now that I love myself so dearly,
    I can smile and be so very happy...
    I have found my inner self,
    And have moved on with no regreat...
    A hard lesson that I learnt in life,
    Has made me stronger to better my life....
    I aim for the top and reach for the stars,
    With no end of what I have achieved so far...
    I feel the happiness within myself,
    And I make myself smile and feel love all around me...
    Finally I can say i have found true happiness,
    True love and respect that flows through me...
    And with all the years I have searched for them,
    It has alway's been inside of me...
    I want you to look at me again,
    And see why you never saw what I had inside...
    You doubted my every try of life,
    With no respect of who I was inside...
    I will scream from the highest mountain,
    And touch that beautiful sky...
    I will never look back on yesterday,
    I will only look forward to my everyday...
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay Sister Sha :wave:

    Welcome Welcome Welcome !!!

    Glad to see you made it in and got your first poem up !!!

    It's beautiful work ... please continue to share more of yourself with us !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Sista Sha...

    Glad ya made it over in the poetry forum

    enjoyed this scribe hope to read more of you

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    SHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAA

    WELCOME...WELCOME....WELCOME. I'm happy to see your first post. I know you're enjoying the peaces from the Family...and I'm sure, they'll enjoy your peaces as well.

    Beautiful...:wink:

    :thanks: for sharing your life's experience with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da family of love & unity dis was
    a very well drop flow tyte do continue to share

    do hope you consider or decide on a membership here at destee's
    to enjoy the full benefits as a premium member and support a community
    look at all you are missing out on as a member !! wow
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882
    welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank you sha for sharing a part of your creative history..
    to be able to recognize your "inner self" and creatively put it down
    a real blessing...keep "looking forward to the everyday"
    (love that line) and flow on...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such a positive scribe, made me smile. Love for that inner self, that is a blessing, and i like the way you flowed with this uplifting write.
     
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    :wave: Hayyyyyy Sha! :wave:

    Welcome to the forums Sis! Come talk to me in
    the discussion forum sometimes, so we can kick
    the breeze!!!

    Looking forward to reading more!
    Nice drop! Keep on dropping 'em Sis!!!
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome sister sha


    commin in with a beautifull write ...



    this had me smilling :)


    i feel ya ....with this peace





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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