Black Poetry : It kills me.....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It kills me
    It kills me
    It kills me
    That before we was born we predestined to be
    You and me
    My blood
    I came first then you came last
    Now all seems to past
    That
    You don't value what we all call
    Blood
    Blood thicker than water
    Water is better
    Than
    Blood
    Bad blood
    Bad blood
    Why do you continue to persecute me so?
    Why do you have a dislike for me your blood?
    I've protected you more ways than one
    I've rescued you more ways than one
    I've bent over backwards
    But yet you continue to hurt me
    Children innocent
    Adulthood still plagued by yesterday
    I'm afraid
    Blood isn't our reasoning
    How could you ever betray me like that?
    I wrestle with my inner demons
    Wondering why we can't get along
    You afraid, broken, upset with the world
    Your still my baby girl
    I can't fanthom the thought if you was to ever die before me
    It's killing me
    That as long as we both shall live
    This union
    By blood
    Will be
    Tainted
    A new year approach
    New beginnings are needed
    We have sown beyond seeded
    I recognize that you Cain will never be
    Abel
    To love me as I love you
    Crying tears of sadness with my bowed head thinking how
    This is
    Killing me.......


    Lavette112/Nevar112
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow da blood line runs thin to a careless love is painful i feel ya !
     
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    They say that blood is thicker than water but its the water that can cleans the soul
    But true blood lines go past the sand's of time and it takes blood sweat and tears to break themold.

    I'm feeling the pain and despair in this one my sister.
     
  4. nevar

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    thank you both for the love shown on this emotional piece.......
     
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    gree with caramelpython.....this was a great flow really enjoyed reading you
     
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