Black Poetry : It Is Time To Say Goodbye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CasualFriday, Sep 25, 2004.

  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    It Is Time To Say Goodbye
    I didn't mean to cause an uproar
    It was said that there was so much to see and hear
    I wanted to see for myself
    I watched yes, and saw how much you enjoyed yourself
    True there were more reasons than just that
    But not all of what think
    Every drop, every flow was not about you or for you.
    Just ideas, thoughts, needs, and desires of mine
    And some of what almost every woman wants, has had, or gone through some time or another.

    But I see......
    It Is Time To Say Goodbye
    I actually thought that in some way you'd be proud
    You see...
    You were the one who scratched the surface for me to put my thoughts on paper not in a novel but in a nice flow
    Because truth be known your writing is off the chain! :jump:

    But I see...
    It Is Time To Say Goodbye
    No need to worry
    I will not venture in again
    Not Casually on a Friday
    Not plain as day
    Nor undercover, thinking you don't know

    Because I see....
    It Is Time To Say Goodbye
    It was once said
    Sometimes you have to let go and
    Say goodbye
    To people and things you may love and cherish
    Cause holding on to tight
    Will not allow them or it to flourish
    So with all that has been said and done
    I see ....
    It Is Time To Say Goodbye



    Goodbye :wave:
     
  2. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good dedication. I don't know who it is dedicated to but it is truely off the chain. I understand that for the things that we love the most...we often have to let them go, and be free!!! Keep doin' ya thing!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes it is good to let go..dont force relax and let it flow
    if its meant to be it will come around around again...but i am sure you know that:wink: peace my sister peace

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    goodbye's some time be sweet hello's
    well felt within
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an emotive write, this flowed with such realism. It can be difficult to let go, if only because we find comfort in what we've become accustomed to. Posed very well.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I admire those that know when to "hold em" ...and when to "fold em"
    very well script poet.
     
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