Black Poetry : It Is I You Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Oct 10, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You’ve opened your eyes to a love that satisfies you
    to the depths of your innerself
    Cried joyful tears when you heard me say those
    majestic three words written on my own heart;
    if only heard throughout your mind's ear

    You desire me in your life as the heavens have their
    passion for the stars to illuminate pathways to our
    beautiful sojourn to love…walk with me now

    hand
    in
    hand

    I am open to receive this, your universal love, as you send it
    across the cosmos and galaxies to reveal a love less ordinary
    For no ordinary love can ever feel this good

    If in your dying days, you were ever to want for just one
    thought to remain constant, it would simply be
    the thought of the days and nights spent enraptured
    in the timeless love I can give to you; sprung in your
    existence...

    hopelessly
    and
    romantically
    connected with your soul

    Let me fall deeply into your love and as deeply
    as you’ll allow; proving to you that love can be
    so pretty

    when it is true

    when it is tender

    when it is complete

    Warm me with the internal flame that burns
    brightest in the quiet of evening’s dawn
    Comfort me with a touch so gentle that it
    soothes and dispels my hidden vulnerabilities
    ever so sure

    Take a moment and smile at the thought
    of this
    extraordinary "we" beginning
    equaling an
    infinite "us" eternity

    Realize
    IT IS I YOU LOVE
    to no end...

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sighhhhhhhh*

    Ah, yes. True indeed. Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. Magnificent flow, GQ. Good to see ya back.

    Nia
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u came in wit a bang!!
    yes indeed
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    cool GQ flava here no doubt
    i especially liked this here

    extraordinary "we" beginning
    equaling an
    infinite "us" eternity

    that some original deep stuff man

    peace

    DSS
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw Shizzz...

    It's been too long dog! But you still got the juice!!! This joynt was like dat!!!

    Reas
     
  6. elayne.

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    bighead.


    soooo... love can be so pretty when it is
    true... tender... & complete? i Loved that
    part! but then again... i've always loved
    what you do with words... & i always will!

    itsallLove, chile! (you know it, too!)

    elayne.
     
  7. LibertyLady

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    'its I who loves this piece"

    beautifull poet...
     
  8. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    GQ SUAVE

    Smooth Is How I Describe Your Work

    SIMPLY SMOOVE :)

    Keep Writing

    One

    pd
     
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