Black Poetry : it hurts

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    life brings much pain and dealing with a passing of a family member gives more
    then we think we all can bare....i woke up this moring dealing with the
    lost of my adopted grandmother.....08/28/2003
    it hurts
    fires burn just as i set it ablaze all by myself
    you watched and loved me like i was yours interested and all
    just like the others i was not of your
    family but took me in as one of yours..
    graduation you where there even the hard times and for my first born son
    and then came the passing of my mother you where there
    am i wrong b/c i want to take this pain alone b/c i cant deal
    i search my soul this morning
    i lost my mother i lost my father i lost my grandmother and there
    stood you in taken there place only a friend to your grandchild
    (my little sister) fo sho
    knowing i was lost you covered my pain and made me stand again
    my world just became empty
    cant turn cant breath knowing i will miss you just tryin to be strong thats all i know how to do....l
    ove you dear a friend of your grand daughter's
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mzblkangel

    That's beautiful...heartfelt. I feel your pain. I'm sure we all do.

    Welcome to the family, Sista...hugs. Thanks for sharing.

    :toast: :heart:
     
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    So sorry sis. I wish I could bare it for you...but since I can't I will just listen a pray for your strength and your peace. Nice Flow.

    with love
    Dre'
     
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    thank you guys for taken time out to read it
     
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    so heartfelt...
     
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    I feel this cause the people who mean most to me are not my family. We are all related on this earth - it's just that some of us share genetics and some don't.

    I send you blessings as your go through this pain, and the faith that the pain will soon subside through the strength you have in foraging on. Peace.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for reading
     
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