Black Poetry : It Hurts!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 12, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Old girl...

    Was the big hurt

    A tortured soul @ war

    Her operation (SECRET)

    Laid mimes to shock and awe

    Mack attacks killed my passion

    But mightily love escaped

    Sparing me her suicide

    Children in our wake

    A liberated woman

    God's wrath,

    Knows her shame

    No pain, no gain

    No menopause-

    No lazy sex to blame

    Providing a real climax

    Even old girl couldn't feign

    Away went her nagging

    Only hope remained

    New love appeared like magic

    Class acts began to bite

    An end need not be tragic

    Don't give up, "home slice"



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know the deal already- tyte!

    nfinite,,
    jh.
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this 1Poet.. Life ends soon enough. Make no rush of it.
     
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    Bless

    Nice Flow. I like
     
  5. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is tyte like Venice
    crazy like the Italian premier
    ya hear
    keep on
    one
    Locust-aka Afro-Sicilian
     
  6. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who could expect anything less than pure HOT SH** from you?
    Once again I feel this piece and what you have to say. Much Love!!:)
     
  7. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dito...to the one above!!!! (Alizentang). Why would we expect anything different.
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyone of you come together in an orgy blowing my mind-
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is a great message dude
    tytely transcribed...
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved it, yo stuff is always bangin!!!!
     
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