Black Poetry : it hurts too deep*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pain.
    chokes everything that i am
    flowing into streams of disbelief

    once walking the corridors
    and
    laboring the steps

    up
    and
    down

    building.
    no more--

    people.
    living breathing loving hating
    working to become better
    than the tainted reflection they had come to be--
    live no more--

    heroes.
    life saving life loving selfless beings--
    people.
    heroes.
    waiting.
    trapped.
    beyond restrictions of their own mind
    trapped--
    below something much greater than themselves--

    pain.
    in my chest swelling--
    heart soft with compassion--
    hard with anger--
    pumping tears and nails--
    simultaneously...

    the pain.
    it hurts too deep*

    sean.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *disturbed*:confused:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy

    i thank you--

    thiscompositionismorethanwords

    *armageddon-ized*

    sean.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U VIBE A SCRIBE SO REAL
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH the great...

    thanks for the read coz.


    sean.

    weallknowthatlifeisqwestrous
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as you do what good poets do and expess through your artistry of words the sentiments of many.
    Thank you we all share your mixed emotions of pain and anger.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my coz shaz

    glad you took time out to hear me. thanks for the read coz.


    sean.
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .......

    This makes me want to write for the first time since last week...

    ****,
    --Archival
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coz

    i'll be watching for that piece.

    glad i could incite.

    sean.
     
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    yes, it does, sean. i feel you on this piece. continue to scribe, as i continue to watch.
     
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