Black Poetry : ...it hurts, it really hurts...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It hurts, it really hurts
    And these tears make it worse
    It hurts to think about you
    Knowing your mind ain’t into
    Me or my trying to please you
    I cry but it breaks me in two
    So now I just don’t think about it
    And now I busy myself around it
    And now I’m trying to ignore it
    And its torture in the end of all of it
    The reasons for my overemotions
    Was because I missed the motions
    Of being part of your world
    Now I’m in a messed up world
    It hurts, it really hurts
    And these tears I’m hiding make it worse...
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne

    Beautifully expressed...very honest.

    :thanks: for sharing you with us..The Fam.

    :toast:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let the tears flow, release and let go. We've all been there a time or two, and I could feel the ache in this. Deeply posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every verse
    and the tears that's worse
    it hurt , it hurt deep
    sometime can not sleep
    trying to give ya heart
    where da love starts
    but if he can't hear it
    come to me i'll listen
    intently coz i feel what's
    missing ....this was deep and felt
    keep ya head up!
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot rich:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sis .....your just due is coming in
    greater showers then your heart will know !
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hope so...ill jus take it one day at a time...
     
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    Hi Lovely
    This flow just wanna make me
    give you a hug sis :grouphug:
    Keep flowing sis

    Peace
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww thankyou:)
     
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