Black Poetry : ...It Feels So Good...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it feels so good…

    young don't know what to do
    she has feelings so [email protected] true
    and he's standin' right there
    she trembles as she stares
    she knows what he wants to do
    she knows that she wants this too
    emotions comin' out of line
    his kiss makes up her mind

    cuz it feels so good…

    kisses lead so much further
    emotions come up to surface
    hands travel here and there
    eyes glow under their stares
    suddenly upon the bed
    conscience runnin' through her head
    screaming you can wait
    but she ignores as she lays

    cuz it feels so good…

    no constraints are on her mind, no not tonight
    just the choice to have him in her arms tonight

    feels so good, she's never had a feelin' quite like this before
    her mind says go, but her body says to ask for more

    it feels so good
    it felt so good
    oh so good
    so [email protected] good…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when inner emotions
    roll in control compassion
    flow to sweet good things
    u know and a rapture so
    warm through da eyez it's
    mesmerized , ((did i do that ?)) lol

    this was tyte sweet and hot ! whewwwwwwwwww
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got me cheesin' over here...thanks:D
     
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    continue on coz i love it when u cheese
    most welcome
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one flowed like a river
    Sweet, sentimental, Vivid
    Very nice piece
    That old song by Twista is in my head- "feels so good"
     
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    :jumping: Yes Yes It does feel good.
    Liking this a lot
    Yo Flow!!!!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for your comments everybody:)
     
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    Girl Your Flow

    Girl your flow is tyte. Keep up the good work :rolling:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww thank u:)
     
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