Black Poetry : it feels like...

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm riding a rollercoaster that hasn't ended yet
    it feels like...
    a splash from a supersoaker 100 now i'm wet
    it feels like...
    that look from that girl with those eyes
    it feels like...
    that means this time i'm inside
    it feels like...
    a car crash with an inflated airbag
    it feels like...
    moms yelling, "pull those pants up, don't sag!"
    it feels like...
    the pastor saying, "Wake up!" while in church
    it feels like...
    that hepatitis shot, "Be still, it won't hurt."
    it feels like...
    gunshots ringing on new year's eve sounds close
    it feels like...
    i've just seen a green, glowing ghost
    it feels like...
    Dreamgirls singing bringing goosebumps and chills
    it feels like...
    balancing a beam or cookies and cream that spilled
    it feels like...
    oops! i did it again in front of a sold-out crowd
    it feels like...
    i was sleeping and someone yelled out loud
    it feels like...
    my favorite song when i got my cologne on
    it feels like...
    the feeling's strong and the thrill ain't gone
    it feels like...
    preparing to fight knowing you're really a peaceful dude
    it feels like...
    having to smile eventhough the streets are rude
    it feels like...
    i smelled death or maybe someone passed gas
    it feels like...
    breaking wind never stank so bad
    it feels like...
    a loved one saying something way off the wall
    it feels like...
    being harrassed and chased by the law
    it feels like...
    i'll never escape this sensation no matter what i do
    it feels like...
    i'm red hot sometimes and other times i'm blue
    it feels like...
    i possess colors of every contrast and every hue
    it feels like...
    i got soul and i don't know about you
     
  2. MzCream2Sixteen

    MzCream2Sixteen Active Member MEMBER

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    This is a nice poem! Its crazy becuz as I was reading it I could really feel all the different feelings!! I really enjoyed reading this poem!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem makes me recall the feeling that I get when my senses are awakened. Much enjoyed, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u took me there and back wit this one
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    it feels like...........................

    LIFE

    great piece

    great pace

    played like a movie

    and yes

    i have soul (spirit)
     
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    It reads like.....Sha'iyn:
    Of course..... hella scribe.


    Much luv
     
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