Black Poetry : It doesn't get any deeper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jul 7, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It doesn’t get any deeper than this baby
    I just whispered, “I love you “
    And I **** sure expect a response
    You see
    I’ve loved you for days
    Weeks
    Months
    Years
    My heart has been held in a state of limbo
    My soul has been disconnected
    My mind has been revolving in a time continuum
    I am the deepest woman you have and will ever meet
    I know for a fact that no woman
    Not even your momma
    Can love you the way that I can
    The way that I want to
    The way that I will
    No other woman can fill every single space
    In your heart
    Cause you see
    It doesn’t get any deeper than this
    Than me
    Than us
    I am you
    You are me
    We are
    Everything
    Cause it doesn’t get any deeper than this
    We are the beginning and the end
    Of each other
    Connected
    In mind
    Body
    And soul
    Listen to me
    Talk to me
    Respond to me
    Love me
    No other man has been able to make my heart beat as fast
    Has made my brow break a sweat
    Has caused an overwhelming surge of emotion to take over
    the inner me
    Cause
    It doesn’t get any deeper than this
    I just whispered, “I love you “
    And I **** sure expect a response

    Natasha:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it just don't get any deeper
    coz the love is much sweeter
    see i am the gate of love
    only keeper
    the notion of life
    we share is felt everywhere
    it don't get any deeper
    the emotional embraces
    traces the faith of our hearts
    u & I
    together is what we measure
    from the nights of flyte
    to a new day light
    yes
    I hear ya
    sure I feel ya
    indeed I know ya
    so in response
    i tell ya
    dis be deeper of how sweeter
    we become
    strong as one
    gurl sistah Queen mad love when u do ya thing !

    LOVIN YA FLOW ))
     
  3. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte piece.
    Your pure poetry never ceases to amaze me.
    I hope he responded with the answer u wanted.
    *emma*
     
  4. Destee

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    i know that's right Natasha !!!

    brother be think'n he aint gotta say nuth'n ... hehehe

    your poetry is so wonderful gurl

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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