Black Poetry : It Ain't REAL...

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It ain't REAL...

    In the dead file

    Fake men boast a penile

    Buck wild stud (you gentile)

    Tell you what I'm gonna do

    It ain't REAL...

    Time to unseal

    Reveal GOD the real deal

    Well-heeled thru the eye of a needle ~

    Flaccid but homie still beats it

    It ain't REAL...

    How does that feel?

    Gee whiz,

    Poet, I'm healed :shades:

    Convicted turning a trick next

    Backslider bottom out reject

    Unreal... (snake)

    Stakes it ain't JESUS

    Empty nothing else pleases

    IT AIN'T REAL...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :bowdown:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U said it best right here
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have created yet another master piece. This is a piece i can dig my brutha.
     
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    Nice enlightening piece, Poet:spinstar:

    :read:

    :picture:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really though..

    Keeping it real humble, THANKS :em1500:
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Work Bro.....
    Nuthin But Work!
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    so right ain't much

    real anymore

    in the virtual

    digital age
     
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    Yes, God is real, 1poet, how often we try to replace God with artificial idols. Lay that truth down.
     
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    MERRY CHRISTMAS

    Wishing you all a very MERRY CHISTMAS :angel1:
     
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