Black Poetry : It Ain't Necessarily So

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 28, 2007.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's make God ours to own
    The world is round
    Upside down ~
    Confusion...

    We're takeout on the go
    Held earthbound
    Heaven bound
    Amusement...

    Weak and shoddy prose
    Converted verse
    Well rehearsed
    Revival...

    Everybody knows
    God is LOVE
    Stays above
    Survivial...

    Are you good to go?


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hammer:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes i good to go

    on the fact that god is love and pain

    i couldn't have worded this piece any better than you did

    this is beautiful work here poet

    and i love that fact that you can "see"

    peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I try to be good to go 1poet, hope I'm suceeding, cause I can't imagine being without God. On point.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well crossed and all i can do is try
     
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