Quiet Poetry Lounge : It’s something

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s something about his nature
    He moves smooth and soothing
    Suave of a man strong and broad
    As his love grows…
    In side of my heart
    It’s something about him
    That takes me above and beyond…
    Like a lasting melody
    He was mold just for me..
    As love takes on a high
    His nature his respect
    His
    His love is inside of love
    Blows my mind….
    With a touch
    Not about control
    But he has the power
    It’s something about his nature
    Wild like fire as we flame
    But yet calm
    He takes my breath
    As I breathe him
    He search my soul
    And release my love
    My shelter in the rain
    It's something.....
    Deep thought
    Mind provoking
    Lover of mine
    Holding my hand
    Its something about his nature…..
    A Man
    A Gentleman
    A King
    A Warrior
    A Lover
    My Baby
    It’s something
    Just something about
    ........His nature
    His nature….
    Like nature mold him for me
    As the earth form me for him
    As we make one….
    For I am his rib
    Can’t describe it
    But it’s something
    Something about his nature
    That turns me on……
    And I am overwhelm
    With him.....

    (C) 2004​
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is an awesome piece...it got to feel good to feet that way about someone. I really enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing it with me.
     
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    It is something about this piece
    that paints a picture so clear!!!!!

    The discovery of ones soulmate
    A blessing very rare!!!!!

    Very beautiful perception!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
    whatever it is sound divine wow!
    dis one took me off my feet into a place unknown
    what a man he is ................smh
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana..yes indeed it will..thanks for the love

    PurpleMoons..to discovery ones soulmate wheeew
    yes a wonderful pleasure for ones heart..thanks for the love happy you enjoyed it....

    $$RICH$$..wheeeeew...lol....smh a man indeed strong and warm beauty within his soul that touch so deep..... thanks for the loving support...
    it took you but i am glad you came down to reply.... :heart:
     
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    this is really sweet...
    there's nothing like
    the love of a woman
    for her man...

    nothing like it...^5
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed to made me come down to see who , what and when
    it flow'd so sweet and smooth tyte write sistah Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's something beautiful, lovely write here.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    :kiss:..............sweet.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage..thank you for the love...and true that nothing like it indeed...^5

    $$RICH$$...you got me spoiled ya know me :blush: ...thank you for all the love..very happy you enjoyed it .....:kiss:

    watzinaname..thanks for the love

    Monetary..glad you enjoyed it...thank you....:)

    Peace
    Angel
     
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