Black Poetry : It’s not fair

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love
    Love
    It’s not fair
    Gentle with his touch as he moves
    Takes you in the wind
    Beyond the starz…
    It took a hold of me before I knew it…
    Love
    Love
    It’s not fair
    Summer flowers blooming
    You could have warned me
    As the fire went up
    Heat with in my heart
    Made the starz shine..
    And the moon shift as
    Desires lifted….
    And the storm hits..
    Losing my mind
    Trying to be cool
    Pretending it aint bothering me
    But my mind is so twisted
    Love
    Love
    It aint fair
    Hits you like a whirl wind
    Kicks you down and picks you up
    Just as fast
    Oh love
    Oh love
    What did I do to you?
    For you to hurt me
    Then love me so dayum good!!!
    Love
    Love
    It’s not fair
    Love what the hell is going on?!
    You got me wide open…
    I feel like singing
    In the wind passing the orbs, into the horizon
    For its great but makes you so weak
    Love
    Love
    It’s not fair
    Bugging and tripping
    Wishing and holding
    Good thing I know he is true to me
    Dancing in the rainbow forever true…
    What a power
    Love
    Love
    It’s not fair
    Just aint fair
    It could of came with a warning label.... :wink:

    (C) 2004
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl i loved the flow! It was so much compassion in that drop. I feel u on this one as well as the others!!! :deal: :spin: :toast: :geek: :rolling:
     
  3. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really nice flow it kinda sings to ya. lovin it!
     
  4. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im feeling u on that warning label....
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    I feel you as well. Hell, I wanna know too. Shooooo

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    I feel ya on this piece sis!

    Love is never fair. It always
    seem to catch ya by surprize,
    be it for the good or bad!

    Tyte drop!!!!!!!!
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice fro real girl so let me drop this right here

    I’m just a label on a bottle but able to throttle medicine
    Proper like a doctor, describe pain pills for the lame and ill
    Take one a day to keep the fakes away in the game no thrill
    Like Cupid let my arrows rip down a narrow strip hoping
    To fall in love I’m tall thug that ball in the club but sloping
    Down a hill bounds don’t build up to success
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wouldn't it feel good to know that somewhere, our other halfs are "thinking, feeling and writting the same thing? why should we carry all the weight...and to keep it real? ...some do go through these changes *but they ain't telling, it's a man thang.*
     
  9. watzinaname

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    No, love isn't always fair. You're flowing with truth here....
     
  10. gempis

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    Lovely exploration of the mysteries of love, sister.
     
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