Black Poetry : It’s A Love Thing

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT’S A LOVE THING

    The pitch of success itch best produce vibrations //
    And let loose citation on deadlines and spy information //
    To tell a lie is devastation flow like mountain streams //
    Throw typewriters drink from fountains then dreams //
    Whack disbursal attack with verbal blend and steams //
    Without forethought at the store I bought whip cream //
    To contribute to my strawberries delicious grip bowl extreme //
    Girlfriend is in a mini-skirt so I begin to work settle down //
    And Meddle around with her thighs throw and toss brown //
    Kisses with no bounds and misses no lip ground pull her slip down //
    Encamp juices damp and looses seat fiber I’m a complete driver //
    Of a Lex want sweet livelier sex if it rise and stall like Niagara Falls //
    Then it’s wise to use viagara yall make the tiger call //
    Dark and dismal how we spark physical sex in the Lex //
    Complex look in a text book make you lust in text //
    From the thrust on the backseat come dust and black heat //
    Stereo plays the exact beat yo my girl then act so sweet //
    Like a widespread change pony ride in bed so strange //
    From a rocky coast, ****y most of the time like Danny Ainge //
    Kiss to excess never miss to suck her breast make sure //
    Oh MADD remember to cum glimmer like a nun pure //
    Smooching buffer my neck make me suffer the effects //
    Of hotness love is trust but a thug disgust me from the projects //
    Crapulous feeling but fabulous dealing if he use a rubber to protect //
    Against pregnancy should have a sense of integrity under bedcover ****s erect //
    Coo-chee on the carpet is a juicy target like a sprucely market men shop //
    So hot buy tickets to stick it kind of wicked but a true plot //
    Love rap is lyrical law with no physical flaw it stews hot //
    Girl got an urge to slaughter coo-chee submerge in water //
    Like a submarine my love queen this thug is mean by order //

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. GQ

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    MADD - at it again!!!

    Flow like ya know brotha!!!

    :peace:
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  3. MADDRAPPER

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    GQ THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL I GUESS YOU'
    RE GONNA BE THE ONLY ONE I GUESS BUT THANKS FOR THE REPLY
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what happened on one other board so this here is tight yall for real yo


    IT’S A LOVE THING

    The pitch of success itch best produce vibrations //
    And let loose citation on deadlines and spy information //
    To tell a lie is devastation flow like mountain streams //
    Throw typewriters drink from fountains then dreams //
    Whack disbursal attack with verbal blend and steams //
    Without forethought at the store I bought whip cream //
    To contribute to my strawberries delicious grip bowl extreme //
    Girlfriend is in a mini-skirt so I begin to work settle down //
    And Meddle around with her thighs throw and toss brown //
    Kisses with no bounds and misses no lip ground pull her slip down //
    Encamp juices damp and looses seat fiber I’m a complete driver //
    Of a Lex want sweet livelier sex if it rise and stall like Niagara Falls //
    Then it’s wise to use viagara yall make the tiger call //
    Dark and dismal how we spark physical sex in the Lex //
    Complex look in a text book make you lust in text //
    From the thrust on the backseat come dust and black heat //
    Stereo plays the exact beat yo my girl then act so sweet //
    Like a widespread change pony ride in bed so strange //
    From a rocky coast, ****y most of the time like Danny Ainge //
    Kiss to excess never miss to suck her breast make sure //
    Oh MADD remember to cum glimmer like a nun pure //
    Smooching buffer my neck make me suffer the effects //
    Of hotness love is trust but a thug disgust me from the projects //
    Crapulous feeling but fabulous dealing if he use a rubber to protect //
    Against pregnancy should have a sense of integrity under bedcover ****s erect //
    Coo-chee on the carpet is a juicy target like a sprucely market men shop //
    So hot buy tickets to stick it kind of wicked but a true plot //
    Love rap is lyrical law with no physical flaw it stews hot //
    Girl got an urge to slaughter coo-chee submerge in water //
    Like a submarine my love queen this thug is mean by order //

    MADDRAPPER PEACE



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    ntropy
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    04-22-2002 01:39 PM

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    that's killer flow. to be honest, i lost what you were trying to say in a couple of places (in parts of the beginning 6 lines) cuz the rhyme sequence and regularity didn't allow filler words or whateva, but i got the feel. sick flow man. i dig the topic. best lines:

    "Kisses with no bounds and misses no lip ground pull her slip down //
    Encamp juices damp and looses seat fiber I’m a complete driver // "

    and:

    "Smooching buffer my neck make me suffer the effects"

    very nice. i like your rhythm.


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    Big Jay T.
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    04-22-2002 01:46 PM

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    That **** pretty TIGHT........... Keep rythming... AND PEEP MY ****!!!!!!!!!!!



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    THE LEGACY
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    04-22-2002 02:33 PM

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    nice flow.....had kind of a poetic feel to it............tight ****



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    04-22-2002 06:17 PM

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    ntropy, Big Jay T. and THE LEGACY thanks for responding to this for real you cats are cool with me yo



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    04-22-2002 06:23 PM

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    yo this was a str8 piece yo...u came hotter that a bunsen burner...
    peep my **** "Amazingly Sickning" and give input...
    stay up...
    ONE


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    04-22-2002 10:41 PM

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    *miNdExpandin*--THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL YO GOT TO KEEP ON DROPPING THIS STUFF



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    04-22-2002 11:51 PM

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    nice flow, good wordplay. Tight piece overall. Keep doing ya thing. One...


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    EC THUNDA THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL YO



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    ya mad......this was a very dope peice right here.....realy feelin it......
    keep spittin dunny.....
    ..OnE-


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    InFiNaTeDaMaGe THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL YO GO TO DROP ANOTHER ONE
     
  5. Rashad

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    Oh Yeah...

    I'm Feelin the Love thang Brugh!
    Thug Passion!! Hott!!
     
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    Rashad THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FO RREAL LOTS PEEP BUT DIDN'T RESPOND SO THANK YOU FOR THAT KID
     
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    madd
    this got flava
    but ain't nothing changed
    we been on since afronet
    dun so
    spread love man
    and you'll get love dun

    feel me madd

    peace dun
    how we do

    dssNT
     
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    Da Street So'ja OK YOU HAVE A POINT I'LL TRY TO GIVE MORE LOVE ANYWAY THANKS FOR LETTING ME KNOW WHATS UP AND THANKS FO RPEEPING
     
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    man u know da Rich be diggin' dis here da love is all good
    going way back not missing a beat ........well said bru !!
     
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    $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE LOVE FOR REAL YO YOU BLESS THIS PIECE
     
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