Black Poetry : Isn't it funny how you think I've betrayed you...somebody have told you wrong...

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It so **** funny how you think I've betrayed what we had

    or what we shared

    How dare you insinuate that I should have held on

    Yes, we both have done wrong

    But you took it to the point of loving another

    You won't admit but you did

    How could you love an outside chick then your main chick

    Now you want to talk about all we've been thru

    I think your shoulda, woulda, coulda is a little too late

    I've had more on my plate than I could ever handle

    You see ba since leaving you I have evolved

    into

    But before you had me in a dark place with my head down low

    Lower than anyone can

    Never look towards the sky for guidance

    I let you take everything I could ever have

    You took my heart and trampled upon it

    You might as well took the very knife I used against you

    and stabbed me

    You broke me until I or noone else could fix me

    You broke me dammit you broke me

    And I am not ashame to say it now because

    Mama got a brand new bag

    This man is a gift from the Heavens

    He's a blessing I never want to return

    I've learned that if you love somebody maybe its best to let GO

    I did and now you can't believe how I am going all out for him

    Talking about how you miss making love and the many position

    Well dummy you wouldnt have to be singing Ray J's song

    "If I had one wish" if you had kept that Magic Styck

    where it belongs

    You've allowed me to move on a make a new home

    You got your woman be satisfied with the headache you deserve

    I know it hurts to see me post of my up and coming marriage but you deserve it

    You took me to Hell and back, and I decided Hell isn't a place I want to be

    You said you love me over and over that you never meant for this to happen

    You wish I could have held on

    Were you concern when I cried over you sorry tail for many nights?

    Huh were you or when the children wanted family time where were you?

    I knew but I couldn't stand to tell your kids another lie

    So why try so I let you go

    For a piece of mind, and mend a broken spirit

    As I am writing this I can't believe that I wasted four and a half years of my life

    Hoping and wishing, lets not forget praying that you would change

    Somethings that are meant to be broken let it remain broken

    I have spoken and there is nothing more to say

    I hope that you read this because I had to let you know that

    It's funny how you think I've betrayed you.....



    Lavette112/nevar112

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  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    girl.. i been looking for the poem where u said should this be my vows..

    and i can't find it.... man can't wait til i can just subscribe to the threads i've been involved in... i get so frustrated when i'm talking to someone and i want to see what they said and i can't get back...

    ur poem was beautiful..

    i can't say ney or ye as far as the vows.. but i will say.. the poem touched .. and it was beautiful.. and if that's what u wan say.. then i wouldn't change a word...

    also, this is a happy time for you......

    and if someone can't be happy for you... that you've found true love then they are just being selfish...

    sometimes.. i think... part of loving someone is realizing that you can love them but you can't share a life with them...

    who cares if someone thinks you betrayed them....

    all i care about is that my new sister grl is happy and about to share her life with someone who makes her feel like the queen that she is.......

    head up.. Miss Beautiful Lady....

    Love you!!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi sis
    It is funny how other don't see the wrong
    they do to others. The simple things can be the hardest
    Peace~N~Love
     
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    I have a friend who's gone through this

    Well, good for you is all I have to say
    You took care of your needs
    How could that betray?
    In the end you didn't betray you
    God didn't make no junk
    When he created you
    In the end you came out stronger than before
    In the end you rise to the top
    And your ransom has been paid for
    Reigneth like you know
    For you are a queen
    Shining like a star
    Beaming all the way

    Desert Storm

    Good write sis, good write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like someone thinks it's all about him...and how dare anyone cause him a lick of pain, even when he brings pain by the truck load. This hit like a sledgehammer.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thank you ladies for showing me some love on this piece and i will do my best to find that poem you are talking about Lady.........
     
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    deep yet packed with heavy weight ......
     
  8. nevar

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    thanks Rich for the love shown to me...
     
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    shame how people treat people sometime

    girl you'll be fine

    keep being the QUEEN you are and you'll be fine

    don't let people bring you down

    peace
     
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