Black Poetry : Is You Foreal

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IS YOU FOREAL

    It seems that today errbody gotta be a poet
    Writing rhymes without reasons and tend to show it
    People fall into this trick thinking oh her rhymes is mighty fresh
    I hear some of these joke mc’s and poets please don’t waste your breath,cuz it aint aqua or crest.
    Throwin’ up yo set claimin that you wet,but that heat you poppin is weak
    True ridas fight for theirs and stand their ground
    They don’t need guns and other people to hold them down
    Flippin’ and servin’ on the corners locin’ wishin’ hopin’ for the next mil’ sista drop a baby they front the bill
    I can’t stand when you say you real just because you got mass people on your team
    When you just the prettiest ***** a lackey for the true hustla for crème
    True hip hop don’t pop out ya mouth just cuz you from down south
    And it’s not the word of mouth if you can’t keep from living without
    A rich sissy say they startin from zero to see if the money will grow
    You aint worked hard for a **** thing you claim
    And in the end bow your head in shame
    I can’t say hate too much because it’s only an emotion of hurt and fear
    Your insides are turning and reeking of blood from the beating you deserved because you didn’t want to hear
    Mama always told you,”Be a **** man.”
    Only nodded ya head and shoved away her hand
    Now a child of the streets got ya mans and them so called,”families.”
    Stop complainin’ bout the president because his actions don’t please your benefits
    Get ya *** up and vote maybe we wouldn’t have ppl strung out on dope
    Maybe I didn’t live the street life maybe I wasn’t a child of the ghetto
    But there are repercussions and consequences in the end,that I know
    I know you don’t want to hear my opinion and your tongue turned cold
    But your stupid *** excuses and pleads have turned old
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely scribed wit da twist
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tanky tanky

    I don't know why I was angry when I wrote that piece,but I had to get it out... :devil:
     
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    sometime we all have to release what's within us
    it's ok to vent flow on let it all out better out then in
     
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    this ish was hype yo! str8 ill to tha fullest of tha full! im luvin this flow! itz just :hot: :hot: :hot: i luv'd tha twist! u wurked dis one! keep that fire comin!
    keep em' comin!
    _*LYriCaL-pAsSioN*_
     
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    feeling you
    on this drop
    let it flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You felt it, you released it well, nothing wrong with that. Keep flowing.
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that I will do glad you all enjoyed it