Black Poetry : Is What Remains, Enough?

[watzinaname]

The new year is coming,
and each day I feel
less and less.
Should I question what is real?
If you take my hand
do I feel it? Or do I
shake it loose
like it's a lie?
If you hug me,
do I embrace you back?
Do I squeeze you tight?
Is it strength I lack?
Am I strong enough to let
you kiss me, caress me,
take me to your bed
and make me feel free?
Is there feeling enough
in me, to allow you
to love me? I pray
what remains in me, will do.

 

[$$RICH$$]

o' yes
ur strong
da feelin
the prayer
as it ring in new
da love u have
inside u will leak
out to the arms
of ya love
u can withstand
the means of hope

very nice flow

 

[watzinaname]

Nice flow with your response Rich. Hope can carry a soul to the next step. Thank you.

 

[$$RICH$$]

yes when one hold hope
there is a better tomorrow
even when the day was bad
it's the uniqueness of self
as the steps become easier
most welcome sistah Queen

 

[MzBlkAngel]

nice flow.....Angel....
enjoyed the read