Black Poetry : Is What Remains, Enough?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 28, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The new year is coming,
    and each day I feel
    less and less.
    Should I question what is real?
    If you take my hand
    do I feel it? Or do I
    shake it loose
    like it's a lie?
    If you hug me,
    do I embrace you back?
    Do I squeeze you tight?
    Is it strength I lack?
    Am I strong enough to let
    you kiss me, caress me,
    take me to your bed
    and make me feel free?
    Is there feeling enough
    in me, to allow you
    to love me? I pray
    what remains in me, will do.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes
    ur strong
    da feelin
    the prayer
    as it ring in new
    da love u have
    inside u will leak
    out to the arms
    of ya love
    u can withstand
    the means of hope

    very nice flow
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow with your response Rich. Hope can carry a soul to the next step. Thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes when one hold hope
    there is a better tomorrow
    even when the day was bad
    it's the uniqueness of self
    as the steps become easier
    most welcome sistah Queen
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow.....Angel....
    enjoyed the read
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you could feel the flow, mzblkangel. Thank you.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feeling my sista...hoping you have enough strength because he makes u feel so weak...mmmmhmmm lol
    flow on my sista
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow....I like
     
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    watzinaname, I been here a time or two and am feelin you in a big way. Am sending love and peace vibes your way for your strength and clarity to find the right solution. It will happen, girl, it will happen.
     
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    This is soo beautiful
    i love this one...
    much love
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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