Black Poetry : Is This The Man.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 9, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I, call you by name
    ___ ____?,
    Questions only you can answer in my spirit
    When the Gemini in me peeps his head through this astrological Aquarius
    Am I addicted or is premeditated that I slip in every now and again
    Just to get a taste of the forbidden
    Sometimes sin, is resurrected
    Fight like hell to resist it
    Yet the allusion of its aroma
    Which is sweetness at times eludes me
    The spirit of deception is transparent
    Satan has many faces, multifaceted his race is
    The natural softness
    The hidden strength
    The side of you that a so-called real man misses
    Father I praise you for allowing me to be in touch with my Mister and My Miss
    With out Losing Focus
    The fact of the matter is that I have no preference
    When it comes to women
    You and I both know I’m straight Laced
    Un-able to escape the ill nana it seems to call me
    The feel of it, wakes from my dream in need of it
    More often than not, I want to taste it
    Loving the way she grooves to my member that enables one to speak
    As she fights to remain silent
    Then, sleeps from release
    No shame, the problem is that I can’t tame this sable
    She’s willing and I’m able
    To be that bee that extracts Honeyfrom her tree
    Her warmth that encamps around Minnie me
    Be there when she escalates and deescalates
    The reason for her sensations
    That extra cup of sugar in her cool aid
    God is this the man you made
    My desire is to make her feel what she’s never felt
    Want to be the one for which she kneels when she’s never knelt
    Father,
    If it’s a sin then deliver me
    Before that thang be the death of me
    It’s the feed, that fuels this fleshly furnace
    Father her infinite Beauty keeps me burning

    Caramelpython 2003
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The eternal flame burns on...nice scribe.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed very well
    my friend...i likes... :angel1:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop poet
    if this the sin of me deliver me......
    that line say it all
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fuel the fire
    you are dropping nice one
    Peace
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel Thank you:angel1: I was not sure about this one , but you have shown me such respect on here and I love to return it 2 you! ;)


    watzinaname.... yes it does even when we dont realize it at times, thanks alot . :D


    $$RICH$$...... weak is the mind but even weaker is the body! :toast:


    Bluewater.... :thanks:


    Olakuoto..... :blush: lol.. thank you
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nearly speechless...

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    Could I just take a stroll within your subconscious...
    I love your writing...
    (I should've known you were a Gemini, lol)
    This was incredible...

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  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhh my

    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
    "SAGE" you have blessed me with a high praise and when it comes from you it is a high standard indeed. :smokin: ... now of course it could only be a gemini's work..LOL :wink:
    the walk is here whenever you want to take it. :x:
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gemini huh?? that explains a lot LoL :)
    this was a lovely read
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaawwwwww Yall know how us Gem's do it..... :nono: