Black Poetry : Is this looovvvveeeee(yes another love poem!!!!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', Oct 18, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I:) when I think about the fact that u :heart: me.
    I don't know why, and maybe reasons don't matter..
    but all my experiences have lead me to this moment..u.

    I wish I could write deep and extensively poetic words right
    here...but this :heart: is simple hence my basic wording...you sing me red and yellow and orange and sunshine and beautifull twurls around and around...

    You take all the drama in my life and write it into a single moment of perfection..you say you love everything about me so far...that so far is this moment right here...

    I could say more..but I'd just start lying...the extent of my capabilities to even try to express what I feel is disabled at this point...

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's da kinda love i vow to hold in bond
    ya most def in love'd
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O' yes guys, I thank u for feeling me....a day at a time in love feels like eternity....I'm hoping this lasts a long time...We've kindda beaten all the odds to be together..and that should count for something.
     
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    love can do that sometimes

    peace
    South Africa
     
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    i like the way you place icons here and

    there :heart: and :)


    keep scribin

    pd :)
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now thats love

    great piece

    always wished i could write love poems but i just cant
    and i'm in love

    now thats crazy huh
     
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    ohhhh i like this piece

    ""Lo"" it is love fo sho!


    beautifull.....

    by the way lonelypoet... i just want to respond ....its not crazy
    i ,m feeling ya ,i have this somethimes to,
    love and expresing youreself in love is always a vulnareble thing
    but you always can try .....remember ""LET no one tell you what you CAN and CAN NOT DO.....(smile)
    you always can give it a try.......
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet piece my sista
     
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    lo'.


    g'on gyrl! ain't nothin' wrong with scribin' 'bout
    love... especially when it's somethin' you feel
    way to very depths of your deep... i'm diggin' it...
    especially this line:
    thank you!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  10. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u guys..love is universal...lets hold on to that to bind us all together..regardless of race, creed, religion and sexual orientation..let's just love each other...

    lo'
     
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