Black Poetry : Is this body really made 4 u

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [/SIZE]Is the body made 4 u?
    I dunno
    As the night air so calme n blissful
    The wind whispers in thoughts in my ear,
    Questioning:"Will u pocess this body tonight?
    I wanted to kiss u
    But u did it first
    I wanna make love 2 u But I fear u
    I fear u soft carressant touch,
    as u fill me up
    I fear ur soathing masclinity,
    because I want to be on top of it.
    If I give u my mind,
    Then u'll have my mind.
    If u have my dignity,
    And u have that,
    Then u have my spirit.
    All this is running through my head
    As u play scavenger hun wit my body,
    As unravel my cloths,
    Stroking my hair,
    U lookin my eyes
    And see my fear
    U look in my eyes
    And give me the signal that u understand
    Because this body is not urs
    But don't worry who knows what tomorrow has in store:kiss1:
    :kiss1: :kiss1: :kiss1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A queen is always worth the wait. I really liked the way you posed this scribe, enjoyed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely thy queeneth is worthy
    i agree one can wait for the sunshine to rise
    this was awesome ........................................
     
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    this was a nice write enjoyed the flo, flo on poet.:blowkiss:
     
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    Body is surely the temple
    When your ready you will open the door
    Much Love Poet
     
  6. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank-u for da love I really appricate it
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this alot...
     
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    WOW GREAT POEM I NEVER REALLY READ A POEM FROM THAT POINT OF VIEW. THANK YOU MUCH FOR SHARING.
     
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    Awesome
    Much love to you.
     
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    The body electric is a queen's temple

    This is HOT (turn out the lights...)
     
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