Black Poetry : is there anything i can do

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Feb 7, 2001.

  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    never thinking i'd be alone
    inside of me love had grown
    feeling safe and secure
    within your passion i was so sure
    but now i don't know what to do
    not feeling your love like i used to
    is it just some bad days that you've had
    never intending to make me sad
    do you need time to think things thru
    perhaps this tension has nothing to do
    with the love between me and you
    i don't know ... i can't tell anymore
    it's so hard for me to ignore
    what i'm feeling deep in my core
    i don't want to be without you
    is there anything i can do ...
    to restore the love we once knew
    to make you want me like i want you
    is there anything i can do ...
    to make our love be brand new
     
  2. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...now sis...

    what brings us to the point
    where we cannot handle feeling
    like we do...not connecting to
    our love like we should?
    how does emptiness bubble up
    and over a cup not filled?
    what brings discord?
    ...drives a wedge?
    ...dries the love well
    between a loving man and woman?

    love...a funny thing that ain't funny...

    peace sis...peace (flow)
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True love will reign!!!! The Bishop knows this....This brotha is a lucky man to have someone like you...

    Peace
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    maybe

    you're going to have to give me more time to think about it :lol:

    tight flow Destee :)

    pd
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang Destee

    tell that brotha he betta get it togetha..... beautiful words from a beautiful sista. If he know's what's good for him, he'll open up and let you in.


    One
     
  6. shaz

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    It is simply wonderful to hear from you, glad to see you sharing a verse or two, sometimes only God knowes and I know that you have already asked him so now if you will wait and listen I am sure that you will hear is answear. This is indeed a rare treat.
    God bless
     
  7. brnsugasweetnes

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    So many thoughts run through my head and my heart as a read and soak this in. I know these feelings. Truly make me ponder the same things, having been hurt but still so much love within the core.
     
  8. Destee

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    Thank Yall so much for your comments on this peace ... gosh ...
    been a minute since I wrote it ... don't rightly recollect what or
    who inspired me ... but thank you so much for the love

    A special note for brnsugasweetnes ... thank you for joining us
    and please make yourself at home here ... please :heart:

    Destee
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee,

    i'm glad you wrote a piece. you know we all follow momma's lead. Nice piece.

    blak
     
  10. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :heart:

    Destee
     
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