Black Poetry : Is There Any Place Like This?

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Essence of the essential knowing nothing and confessing everything...

    Mind blowing wandering while eating...taking from my plate....throbbing to the beat of syncopated words that reach out and gently pull at parts covered and heated....mmm...mmm...mmm... oh my!!!

    Legs weak, senses thrice as depleted, staggering to regain composure where none ever was...MINE to occupy...a conquest divine rich with steeped simmering tenderness dreamed of by many...experienced by a precious few...never imagined...it...would...be...

    Her.

    The first time not enough as the fire was built...laying logs on your fire.
    Were the fields of the emotional nebula WIDE enough?
    Could the ignited smoldering incense of two souls that burned as one since time first opened it's all knowing eye be enough to fill her and keep her on TRACK?

    The second time a thirst not quenched....a body SHAKEN....
    a soul calmed not STIRRED....eyes rolled back holding on....don't let go....eyes rolled back....can't let go.

    The third time unconcious anticipating Oz as Neverland awaits clicking heels as your curtain is opened....pulled back- and you know beyond beyond that this is the Wizard....oh....mmm....yes....that wonderful Wizard.

    Where is home?

    Ask yourself.

    Be honest.

    Touch the deepest, darkest parts of your soul.

    IS THERE ANY PLACE LIKE THIS?
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know this feelin' too d*mn well...very nice piece...
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quin I wish I knew girl....
    Dayum this was deep....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u took it there very deep scribe
    i've been mentally there too
    nice flow
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was deep. I don't know the answer yet because I'm a little too young right now but when I find out I'll holla back.

    Much Love,
    Foxy...................
     
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    Just for the record.......Playwitit, Quin's a Guy...:wink:



    Whoa.........Q, you took sistah on the deepest of mental journeys
    on this one.........having been in this Oz'like place before...
    mentally, spiritually, physically...I can relate but you "articulate"
    experiences as such, so well and give those of us.....who have not
    yet experienced such, something to think about :blush:is there really someone out there who can take you there......to that place.......
    of never, never..............obviously......yes.........and

    There is no place like it,..............Deeply.....smooth.....flow!
     
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    whoa....
     
  8. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahem......let me clear my throat.

    Play....Thanks for your love and support, you always got your shovel out for a BROTHA....I'm so pleased you dig me. lol


    LG One.....The feelings that you're feeling, make me hear Frankie Beverly in the background!!! Thanks boo!!! lol


    Most high RICH.....Wait until you can tie that feeling to the physical as well as the mental.....it's like grand ma's home made grits!!!!(Please forgive me Al Green!) lol


    My Foxy......Babygirl when you do find out and it's the right one....I'll hear you holla without saying a word!!(Is that Miss CLEO over there?) lol


    My SAGE....Your ORACLE thanks you and has already made any adjustments necessary and has in his possession ALL you may ever need, want, or ask for.(Can I BOLDLY go where no MAN has gone b4?) They said rain is in the forecast, but you've been wet for me since birth.


    SwtT.....Did you mean Whoa or did you actually mean WHOA? lol

    Most deep and heartfelt thanks to my friends....til the next episode ya'll.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Oracle......., Boldy.........I ask, with whom am I speaking, :lol:
    The id, the ego or the superego (just kidding)................those
    are some strong words you pose But I've got nuttin but luv for ya! :wink:

    Your,
    Sage :heart:
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I rediscovered this piece and thought y'all might enjoy it as much as I did. :look:
     
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