Black Poetry : is the sex REALLY that good?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i didn't know the cost of lovin him would bring...
    it was somthing that stood and
    shrunk into the shadows
    laughing silently....
    his masquerade went on...
    till his fingers would reach into my sugar walls
    and make my body tremble....

    he knew that **** was his....
    sometymes i would walk up to the windows
    at 11:58 and hope that at midnight the moon
    would be grateful enough to carry me up to it tonite

    i wondered what the future brang....
    would i have a future...
    or would i wish that the horror would jus stop
    rangin in my ears...

    his touch was soooo goodd
    on my open flesh..sometymes
    yet his hand broke my ribs in pieces
    i will never forget that night in the hospital...

    perhaps...one...day...i...will...learn...to...stay...away...from...love...and...sex...

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  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    thats deep. much love n respect...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwww!!
    someday but today shhhhhh!!
    this was a notion of motion poeticly spayed
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!

    Story... you are a deep lil' sista with a wise old soul.

    I am a fan


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: WOW!!!



     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This here is on fire
    I love the way you lead us through this one
    This is creative genius
    Honesty
    Depth
    Creativity
    This one is a winner for sure!!!!!

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Heeeey story
    You already know I gotz madd love for you sis
    Lovin your style all the while still! :wink:
    Nita
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  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love....lol
    :heart:
    -story
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are flowing sister
    our sweet sister
    liking your drop:)
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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