Black Poetry : is that you at the door?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 17, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am here and you there
    and even though I speak into this phone
    with verses of you that i hunger
    I wonder
    if you really hear me
    they say that absence makes the heart grow
    fonder / that's like saying
    a terminally ill patient will miss cancer
    see...my heart grows weaker...

    i wish i could keep you..well if i was talking
    to someone else I wish i cound keep her
    ...near...the sounds of echos in empty arms
    has me dancing off step amongst the
    field of deadened flowers bent backwards
    as if running away from the sun...burying
    themselves to die so I can youlogize them
    with fluid proverbs of promises broken and
    a future lost

    are we destined to keep this distance?
    that divides us with despair?
    do you hear me on this end? words
    tailing off with the end of another day
    looking for you at my front door...waiting
    for you to get lost in you ... search for your
    soul and love it forever.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH...the force of LOVE as it pulls at our shirt tails.
    drop the phone
    take a ride
    do a knock knock on the door to her heart
    and sink your teeth in her tomorrow.

    she'll respond.

    speak poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeee!!! all i can say !!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.


    ...i am FEELIN' this. uh huh... wit all capital ltrs!

    you know i be lovin' the way you do love!! :D

    thank you for sharing... imma go read it again!
    (just to make sho i ain't miss nothin'. :lol: )

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "just get their if you can" feeling this one
     
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