Khasm13 : is that it?

Khasm13

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been gone 4 awhile...
had 2 get my growth on...
cause my smile had been gone 4 more then a mile...
i come back 2 see some of the same...
simple simon poetry and concepts that are lame...
oh Lord do i miss the days when poets in here amazed...
now i just see poets that write like they are dazed
with no creativity
just some more sex talk
like thas the only thing they are living for b
hardly no flows 4 black history
talking about how we still aint free
i guess some of ya'll think that we are mentally
well...u've been gased like a pinto bean
cause we still aint free
and neva will be
as long as black folks display all of this complacency
so...for effort, direction and sheer zeal for life
i give this poetic page snapshot a D......minus
cause some of ya'll still sound like u need ur blanket
like linus...
 
Dam took the words out of my mouth
Yet I cant say stuff like this
I get beheaded but its real
The poets are laming the game
With fairy tale ryhmes
I still think they are all the same
No creativity in there ryhme delivery
There ryhmes aint ryhmes
Im just madd with energy
Burn flames with serinity
Its mind games and telepathy
Chest shots to infiniti
Wack lines are killing me
Thats why I stop posting
Cause the rest was killing me
Man we need to step it up

I feel ya Brother Khasm
You just dont know!!
 
sometime da flow is what's felt
yet the reality is what's delt
lines scribe through da hands
off da mind of a poet's beat
indeed we never free in this
none liberity tree soon it all will pass
just like before and the rest

word up !
flow on bruh ! kick it in gear.........
 

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