Khasm13 : is that it?

Discussion in 'Khasm13' started by Khasm13, Feb 28, 2006.

  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    been gone 4 awhile...
    had 2 get my growth on...
    cause my smile had been gone 4 more then a mile...
    i come back 2 see some of the same...
    simple simon poetry and concepts that are lame...
    oh Lord do i miss the days when poets in here amazed...
    now i just see poets that write like they are dazed
    with no creativity
    just some more sex talk
    like thas the only thing they are living for b
    hardly no flows 4 black history
    talking about how we still aint free
    i guess some of ya'll think that we are mentally
    well...u've been gased like a pinto bean
    cause we still aint free
    and neva will be
    as long as black folks display all of this complacency
    so...for effort, direction and sheer zeal for life
    i give this poetic page snapshot a D......minus
    cause some of ya'll still sound like u need ur blanket
    like linus...
     
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    just try'n 2 stir it up in here cause ya'll need it...
    badly...


    one love
    khasm
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam took the words out of my mouth
    Yet I cant say stuff like this
    I get beheaded but its real
    The poets are laming the game
    With fairy tale ryhmes
    I still think they are all the same
    No creativity in there ryhme delivery
    There ryhmes aint ryhmes
    Im just madd with energy
    Burn flames with serinity
    Its mind games and telepathy
    Chest shots to infiniti
    Wack lines are killing me
    Thats why I stop posting
    Cause the rest was killing me
    Man we need to step it up

    I feel ya Brother Khasm
    You just dont know!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime da flow is what's felt
    yet the reality is what's delt
    lines scribe through da hands
    off da mind of a poet's beat
    indeed we never free in this
    none liberity tree soon it all will pass
    just like before and the rest

    word up !
    flow on bruh ! kick it in gear.........
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel u on this.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word the ***** UP!
     
  7. Khasm13

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    i saw your message nevar and you are correct...that is totally what i meant by this little poem...i too was molested sexually when i was a kid, by my aunt...so should i use that as an excuse to write about sex all the time?

    this poem was not meant for one person, it was my general analysis from looking at the board after so few poets kicked a black history poem...the purpose was hopefully to get more meaningful poetry out of it...if sex is the most meaningful thing in your life then so be it...to each their own....this is my opinion and only my opinion...and again, this was not directed at one poet...


    one love
    khasm
     
  8. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is felt.. but imma drop one on ya..
    to set the story straight..
    PoeticManifesta.. will foreva be great!
    :skate:


     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea... that whole sexualy confusion and molestation thing is lown all outta porportion..
    cause siittin where im sittin..
    in the same boat as most...
    theres more to klike than sex..
    more emotions to express than sex can convey..
    perhaps yall just aint find the way!


     
  10. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam! I liked this!
    Nice message!:kiss2: