- Mar 26, 2003
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been gone 4 awhile...
had 2 get my growth on...
cause my smile had been gone 4 more then a mile...
i come back 2 see some of the same...
simple simon poetry and concepts that are lame...
oh Lord do i miss the days when poets in here amazed...
now i just see poets that write like they are dazed
with no creativity
just some more sex talk
like thas the only thing they are living for b
hardly no flows 4 black history
talking about how we still aint free
i guess some of ya'll think that we are mentally
well...u've been gased like a pinto bean
cause we still aint free
and neva will be
as long as black folks display all of this complacency
so...for effort, direction and sheer zeal for life
i give this poetic page snapshot a D......minus
cause some of ya'll still sound like u need ur blanket
like linus...
had 2 get my growth on...
cause my smile had been gone 4 more then a mile...
i come back 2 see some of the same...
simple simon poetry and concepts that are lame...
oh Lord do i miss the days when poets in here amazed...
now i just see poets that write like they are dazed
with no creativity
just some more sex talk
like thas the only thing they are living for b
hardly no flows 4 black history
talking about how we still aint free
i guess some of ya'll think that we are mentally
well...u've been gased like a pinto bean
cause we still aint free
and neva will be
as long as black folks display all of this complacency
so...for effort, direction and sheer zeal for life
i give this poetic page snapshot a D......minus
cause some of ya'll still sound like u need ur blanket
like linus...