Black Poetry : Is it Wrong?

[watzinaname]

Is it wrong
to try to make wrong, right?
Would you attempt
to change day into night
Would you try to force
the lion to lay next to the lamb
when neither animal acts likes
they give a good ****?
Do you throw all caution
to the wind and try,
no matter what the stakes,
just do or die?
Do you claim temporary insanity
simply to prove a point of view
Is your way of seeing things
that important to you?
Apparently
For it seems to me
that you are trying to show
just how convincingly you can go
left, than left again, turning into
a right, only to have that right
be so, so wrong
no matter what direction you might
have meant to have taken
Now honestly,
is it wrong?

 

[queentswana]

My "wrong" ...could rightly, be your "right" just as well as ...I could see one "comming" and the same one, you can view as..."going"
...did I say that right?
love the poem either way, thanks for sharing

 

[watzinaname]

Sometimes, a person can see an apple is an apple, and keep trying to make it an orange anyway. But, I get what you're saying, it's in the way one views things. Thank you for the luv queent.

 

[$$RICH$$]

one whom see it as is also can be viewed as what was
when u feel on point it's never wrong within when many will see it as to be not right
so the answer yet known ..............

 

[watzinaname]

Well brotha, yes, and there are some things that are wrong to all concerned, but I guess that's when that "don't care" notion gets the nod. Thanks for the response Rich.