Black Poetry : is it worth it?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Apr 29, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I watch
    As she approach…

    My heart beating
    To the rhythm of her
    Hips sway
    As she says
    “hello, balla”
    I want to holla
    As my eyes traverse
    The mountains and valleys
    From head to toe
    "****, baby, yo..."
    Her nipples erect
    Protruding through an ivory silk blouse
    “oooh” is what I want to say
    but “ouch” is what comes out
    as I attempt to adjust
    my lust
    for God’s greatest gift to man
    finally
    I respond
    “hello. May I help you?”
    I tried to be cool
    She gave a mischievous smile
    Said, “what’s up boo?”
    “Do I know you?” I asked
    as she pulled upon me
    “No, babyboy
    but in a minute imma see
    if you can really handle
    a honey like me.
    But know this, big balla
    My loving ain’t free”

    My swollen heart dropped
    My lusting died too
    Babygurl was looking good
    But somethings I can’t do
    AIDS
    Herpes
    Syphilis
    And all that
    A life time of suffering
    Just for going up in the cat

    ****.

    just can't go out like dat.
     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AMEN!!!

    Now only if we could get other brotha's to have the same respect for themselves, and their lives!!! diggin' this joynt!

    LOVE&RESPECT

    ~Used2BonStageShakinItButNowChooseAbstinence~
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everything that looks good aint good

    Glad you know this b~

    wishing more MEN had the same level of maturity/common sense that you possess.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BALLER.....

    there you go again!!... puttin' a smile on my face!!

    you bringin' the truth!!... but you do it in such a
    wonderfully poetic way... that i can't help but to
    laugh out loud when i reach the end!! you da man!! :)

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HELL YEA!! BALLER MAN I FEEL YA BIG TYME
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:

    maaan, i pass on the "itches"...
    this was needed here.
    as Afridancr said it looks good but it's not..
    and since it's not good, it's not even worth lookn' at 2 me..
    i pass girl, mooooove :wink:
     
  7. SugaTray

    SugaTray Member MEMBER

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    Tell it Baller, we all need to remember that STDs ain't no joke and it can happen to anyone of us. Keep the pants up and the dresses down.
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do ya' thang bru~

    Lovin' the vibe of this piece baller!
     
  9. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller ya know the answer is hell no
    dont wanna get burned
    i hear ya .........say it so all the
    bruthas can hear...
     
  10. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    are there

    still brothaz (and sistaz) who DON'T think twice about doin the raw nassssteeee???????

    this is an excellent reminder, baller, thanks for this.


    Cela
     
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