Black Poetry : Is it possible..?

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey...Today Betty called...
    it was wrong...
    her man left her happy home..
    and Teddy .....Teddy's lost....
    yes he's lost....
    Ireen cut the whole thing off..

    I,m so scared so many people breaking up...
    misscomunication...temptation...seducings..lust..
    and i dont know what the future may hold for us...

    i know...... its all in Trust..
    in trust..yes.
    but...
    is it possible?
    together Strong..
    and holding on...

    maybe if we believe in Love...

    Today ....Sammy called
    t'was wrong...
    Her man did,t keep his hands from this lady..
    And pam ....
    pam and bob...
    they broke up..
    they changed partners...
    and now she sold her soul...
    to Rob...

    I,m so scared so manny people breaking up...
    more seperations....les modavation for building it up..
    and i dont know what the futures holds for us....

    i know.....
    its all in trust..
    in trust yes....
    but is it possible ?
    together Strong?
    and holding On?
    maybe ....
    if we believe in love..













    (years go by)




    Today i called you up...
    to say "my love" ..
    we still got it going on...
    and baby....
    we aint lost..
    we're still in love...
    Now i know...
    Now i know...

    It Is Possible....
    together Strong...
    and Holding on...
    It is !!....
    Possible....
    together Strong...
    and Holding...

    my sweet...


    Cause we Believed in Love.......

    "
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was nice , just maybe if it was love .
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sooo cute:heart:
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks beauty,s but rich ....i think you didnt understood the poem..(maybe i,m not shure lol).. cause you said .Just maybe if it was love......
    its about how two people finaly hold on to the love they got....
    and that that love they have is treu ..............like Real love is...

    much love to ya...
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot...
    sweet and gentle
    just have fait all is well...
    love this
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angel....
    huggy..

    libby...
     
  8. Khasm13

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    this is da real right here
    cause it is possible
    believe'n in love
    not lust
    in God
    we trust...

    i loved this message lady...
    ps... i like da name change
    it fits you betta :)
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was great...so many relationships are falling apart these days that it makes those of us who are in relationships and who want relationships scared...it's nice to know that this one did survive.
     
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