Black Poetry : IS it Me (or) Is it U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What is it
    why!
    we can't see
    is it u
    or is it me ?

    love given
    unto u
    in return
    I get burn
    what is it
    who
    did it go wrong
    didn't u hear
    my solo song

    U knew me
    from the start
    u knew me
    yet u judge me
    yet u call me out
    ask me if u will
    but please
    don't make a deal
    i am what i am
    i am who i to be
    here i rule
    i built my cha'ple
    brick by brick

    colour blind i'm not
    i see da beauty as
    they mix
    to a rainbow
    follow me
    shhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
    now why hide behind
    the stone u toss
    and now baf a lost
    cross my river into da pond
    breathe my air
    into ya lungz
    hold my treasures
    with no care

    call me what u wish
    but i am the main dish
    in motion
    my pride ride on these
    waves
    play me not forth i care not to be
    so please don't do dis to me
    i fear of none
    and to lose u
    maybe a lost
    but to protect my wealth
    at all cost
    i'm stronger then u know
    can't u feel it in my flow
    i weaken to none
    i am worthy
    i sit on the throne
    i am the right
    i am the wrong
    so is it me !
    or is it u
    that don't understand .
    :confused:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What It Is

    Unjust!... is what it is

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u felt where i was and what i was feeling!
    yes it's unjust ! unfair and wrong
    so i continue dis song
    now who belong !?
     
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    Blue Active Member MEMBER

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    Rich, you snappin'!!! I don't blame ya, man. I know how it is.
     
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    i know that's right stop blaming start loving!!!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was worded and expressed so well
    Peace love and respect to ya, mann.
     
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    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya my brother....I feel ya.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed Blue ................thankz 4 feelin' me here

    MORE.........when it come to love one seem blind
    and just don't understand ....Thankz a million

    skrybe7........word up i was in a maze wit dis one
    a feeling that controled da flow ....Thankz 4 da read

    jelli .................nice to see u flowin' u felt where i'm going wit dis
    Thankz sis.