Black Poetry : IS IT LUV?

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it luv when he hits u
    n treats u like a tissue
    is it luv when he calls u all sorts of names
    ****,ho,***** thats what he is always sayin
    then when he wants some ***** he pretends 2 be nice
    ladies tell me is it luv when he cheats on u almost every nite
    n when u ask him about it he lies
    so tell me if that aint luv what r u doin wit him
    girl u need 2 move on
    4get about that fool like an expired coupon
    he doesnt no wot he's got till its gone
    its a shame
    da time he realize his mistakes
    it will be too late
    n he will have himself 2 blame
     
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    Is it luv when he hits u
    n treats u like a tissue
    is it luv when he calls u all sorts of names
    s1ut,ho,b1tch thats what he is always sayin
    then when he wants some pu55y he pretends 2 be nice
    ladies tell me is it luv when he cheats on u almost every nite
    n when u ask him about it he lies
    so tell me if that aint luv what r u doin wit him
    girl u need 2 move on
    4get about that fool like an expired coupon
    he doesnt no wot he's got till its gone
    its a shame
    da time he realize his mistakes
    it will be too late
    n he will have himself 2 blame
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no it isn't luv thanks for sharing this piece poet!
     
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    Hi rapchild
    It is sad, that anyone should have to live
    with someone who don't know how to love
    Your poem is a reminder of the hurt
    A very deep hurt, that no one should ever
    have to deal with.. ..much love

    Peace & Love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U're preaching to the choir!!!!
    Love it.:smooch: :smooch:
     
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    Nicely written. Thanks for sharing!:)
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was feeling this raphild, dis was deep and real, and naw it aint luv, sho..i dont kno wuh dat is..lol


    blackluv and bp
     
  8. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u for ur kind words.