Black Poetry : is it love?

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember back on those days
    when all I could think about was u

    You made me forget all of the things
    those other ****** put me through

    The first day I saw u
    was the first day of my life

    You were real and honest
    exactly my type

    Each day I got to know
    u more and more

    You are everything I had
    ever hoped for

    You taught me things
    that we can't learn in books

    You taught me that everything cannot
    be judged just on its looks

    I promise I will leave
    u never

    And my love for u
    will be forever

    One day I hope I
    can be your wife

    Because u are and will always be
    the love of my life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was sweet and truely love
    love the sweet stanza's
    this stole my heart .................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This seemed so genuine and pure from the heart. Enjoyed the flow.
     
  4. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet like honey.

    <fades in>

    Really felt this poem, and the emotion expressed here. You did a wonderful job of capturing that once in a lifetime, now I finally found love, feeling.

    Excellent Work!

    keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

    <fades out>
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel the writers love as I read line after line it make you loose track of the time. Love is definitely in the air on this piece. Good work.
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll, i loved all of ur comments!
     
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