Black Poetry : Is It Just Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 21, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IS IT JUST ME
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    Right,
    Or wrong
    Proud Mary,
    Is selling hers
    Freaks are out
    Inside the burbs
    The rich and famous
    Don't want a scene
    Just wish to cream
    Wet caviar dreams...

    Kids all in their underalls
    Sex it up then take the fall
    Pimps just want 'em... turning tricks
    Doing drugs to deal with it

    Calling unholy pedophiles
    The mouth of babes
    Will point you out!
    Men who rape are deviant
    You don't relate-
    To manly traits

    Fathers run the other way
    Leave behind their DNA
    Abandon yours,
    So you can play...

    Making my society PAY



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is deep...hard...real.. .strong 1poetsought...
    Peace
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heavy piece here, Poet!
    But this must be said!
    Peace to ya!
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man...........you got deeper .and deeper..and finally......you struck a vein...:(
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mentally deep reality check spoken here
    da truth gotta be told
     
  6. cattalina

    cattalina Active Member MEMBER

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    I really liked your piece...very DEEP!
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw it aint just u brah...its raw real like u say :)
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so deep and real. i loved it.
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...the flow was on point...and no its not ust u i 2 have noticed this.....keep it up
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i can get with this
    understanding and it was deep keep it coming