Black Poetry : Is it everything?(Please help me understand!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gayluv, Aug 29, 2003.

  1. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    Is it everything,
    to want?
    to feel?
    Left with nothing more to give.

    Is it everything?
    reaching.
    searching.
    Looking for the truth with nobody lurking.

    Is it everything?
    To you,
    Or to me.
    Is it all your ever hoped for,
    all you want to be?

    Is it everything?
    Worth the life,
    and the stars,
    Worth the extra effort you put in to who you are.

    Is it everything?
    The little stuff you go through,
    Cause best believe,
    One's do recieve,
    worst than what you do.

    So when you look down,
    and your heart can't bring,
    ask yourself,
    Is it everything?
     
  2. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    I am a tad bit confused as to what I meant with this particular scribe. But yeah... I guess... whateva!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know this feeling, I've looked into my heart at times
    when I was in question on something I thought I
    couldn't live without and my heart answered yes

    it's everything.......sometimes only for a moment but
    even for that moment, it was everything

    Nice flow, Gluv
     
  4. Khasm13

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    everything is not meant to be undastood...
    good scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's ok to not know what it means. it was in your heart, and that's what's important. sometimes it's hard to understand what's in your heart, but it's cool all the same
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its ok not to understand everything
    i like this flow its all good
     
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