Black Poetry : Is It Because...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PlayWitItPimp05, Jul 12, 2003.

  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Note: During my brilliant days of poetry, I have never really touched upon the subject of injustice. My Destee fam, if anyone should know that to be genius and untouchable you must learn how to dibble and dabble in all subjects. So yall tell me whatcha think!!!)

    I kinda feel its a lil crude for my taste......but its my first time so work wit me here.....

    Heart strings are twisted like a violin or piano
    Are you trying to tell me that this is all I can amount to?
    You have no respect about you
    But you wonder why I doubt you?

    Are you jealous because of the melanin
    That makes my skin
    Da complexion
    That society is flexin
    And the media is stressin?
    I'm just tryna learn a lesson!

    Are you jealous because of
    of my naturally wavy mane?
    Untouched by the fame
    That your shower head and shampoo
    Every night proclaims.
    Because I spend less currency
    On my impeccable hygiene?
    Man I can't believe you're tryna tell me
    That someday I will not reign.

    Are you jealous because I have a vagina?
    That you have yet to tryna
    Push into
    You wish you
    Could taste my cinnamon spice
    Because it seems all you have
    Is a perilless flight
    Within your outer space .
    You have yet to push me
    And I'd show you how much
    You'll regret having touched
    My hot spices.

    Are you jealous because I am tomorrow's future?
    You that I am gonna be
    The one that could shoot ya
    For a crime committed in times
    Where it was alright to booster
    Racial injustice- back then you mighta got juiced up.
    For shooting my brutha
    For your promiscuous fools
    Steadily diggin graves- hell betta make dat ditches
    In which my relatives were pitched in
    And you mad because now
    That can't even be mentioned???

    Go as far as you want to try and push me
    But remember the only thing you showin is nothing
    So if you think you can do something
    That will REALLY confuse me
    Then go ahead and break me
    Down in tha morality
    Because THAT is what makes me
    And if you can't even step
    To my poetry
    Then playa best believe
    THAT YOU GOTS NOTHIN ON ME!!!
     
  2. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come on now pimp, u knew what u were doin when u started this.....never cease to amaze...the strength in your words is so empowering that walls can be torn down when they are properly heard....nuffrespectdue
     
  3. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u do da **** thang!!!

    felt ya power in this flow... that's fa sho!!!... keep on tapping into new subject matter expanding the consciousness you possess... & continue to bless us with ya flow...

    peace

    p.s... sometimes we gotta get a little raw :)...
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa.....

    Thia was too tyte...you had me like...DAMMM on every single line:eek: :)
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are on your way to genius. I personally think that you already are untouchable:D This was grrrrrrrrrreat!!!
    Much love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! nice flow
    playwitit.......let me add that the word p***y & ny**a is on our banned
    list and I ask that you edited such word for the cleanest of our
    community we in no way wish to hinder ya flow or how u express
    see our forum rules and banned words list for a better guideline
    of such ......love what u do and how u flow ...
    M.T.
    $R
     
  7. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is not because your skin is black but because the beauty that you posses, its is because you are the tradition of the Universal King Jesus as you ,as he, as I as me, its because you are the jewel that shines upon the world, the inheratance from God, that no man can erase, hate me be me hero's nothing but a sandwich, he the hater shall be the servant who holds the door for the Queen and the King. Its not the poor, but the meek, the heart, the childlike forgiving and hoping to reach out as the devils refuse the essense of Gods love, its not the ruler of nations, there is only one God, the riches of your inheratance shall be reclaim, sit and humble and watch God work.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice

    nice one pimp, this is pure brillance. flow on
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cypher.....lol. thank you for that comment. i'm glad u were feelin me. i've figured out that a person without the right words or vocab will never achieve their goals. without words, we are useless.

    NB....my sistah....

    girl who u tellin!!!

    SwtT....thank cha boo!!! u know i appreciate ur love!!!

    alizentang.....thank u for dat comment!! what can i say, i'm just tryna be like you boo!!!

    $$RICH$$....sorry, of tha :puke: fowlness of it. i didn't think u would mind if i edited the cursing. but what was i thinkin :confused: :lol:

    ASHANTA........every new thread or post you make always leaves me in admiration and with a smile on my face. thank you

    the_story.....the goddess in you has touched my heart. thank you

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all good word up and well delt
    dis was the bomb too !!