Black Poetry : Is Any-1 Listening.....?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by realeyezrealize, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Any-1,
    There...
    Any-1 HERE!

    This mind what a tool for some a weapon misused
    turning into their own soul,
    Can Any-1 know...

    TAKE, TAKe, TAke, take it slow please
    let not these,
    that which is seen,
    control this destiny,
    preordained
    Any-1 making their way
    Soooo much to say
    Is Any-1 There,
    Come receive
    Hear,
    The sweetest melody
    played just for you and me

    OOHHH,
    I know farr rrr too Well,
    the Hell of a fight....... con-fusion of the mind
    Heart's

    (there are 2)

    intertwined
    the good and the bad
    Thought's of the past
    remiencing
    unforgiving suffered thinking
    Is Any-1 There

    Now Listen to the beat
    all fears are defeated more than a feeling
    IT soothes me
    Literally moves me
    from my use to be state
    Transformes me to a place safe in mind
    I unwined from my discomfort
    past hurts
    The harmony lifts me
    instruments lead
    a life time experience for me
    and it's just beginning,
    I am HERE!!
    sheltered and stable
    emotions controlled
    HOLD,
    NOW
    rewind
    I play this soul music all the time
    Hooked to my Saviours rythum.
    Is ANY-1 Listening :luvv:
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH YEAH, You got A fan, nice drop :jawdrop:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeeee1 i'm listening awesome sweet yummy drop

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    have u seen what your missing out on .....look !!!!
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  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was str8 tight
    come join us in chat drop some flows
    or bring a topic.....
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At times I am not sure if the words meet the the reality
    But yet still I will keep on trying as my saviour guides me 'cause he inspires these anecdote, He Hears and He know's
    I appreciate it too, Thanks to you all.
    A premium member sounds real nice,
    I'll try ASAP.
    Thing's are tight
    but it's worth it
    coming soon!!!!
     
  6. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize, I can hear your song
    I can see it before my eyes all night long
    What you scribed was fantastic
    very stable and not at all elastic




    realeyezrealize, seize the day
    great poem you have made

    Now go and show me some of your love
    Read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land" Please tell me about my skills, tell me if there weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
  7. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    You write with your soul!
    A language I hear so loudly
    and clear!

    I can hear your rhythm!

    Loving your flow!
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm listening... :wink:
    for there is no rhythm
    or song sweeter than
    that of a divine melody...

    Inspirational flow!
     
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