Black Poetry : Irresistible Sweetness

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve yearned for you
    in ways that only you
    & I can conceive…
    now you’ve appeared
    just like you have
    a million other tymes
    in my dreams…
    & you’re working your
    sweetness on me…
    your irresistible sweet-ness
    softly… but surely
    it’s becoming evident—
    my heart is still your
    willing place of residence
    & this **** is !!ur-gent!!…
    got me calling for a test
    of the… emergen-cy
    GottaHaveYourFineBlackAss
    broad-cast network… :D
    & I don’t know
    if you know this…
    but your sweetness is
    consuming me…
    with its burning intensity
    … so I’m
    about to go all out…
    it’s vital that I convey
    beyond a shadow of a doubt
    how it remains imperative…
    & of the essence… that I be
    allowed to solely possess
    a non-refundable portion of
    your irresistible sweet-ness
    so… go ahead & bathe in
    the glow of the Sun’s lyght
    be lifted to majestic heights
    & by all means… keep…
    working your sweetness on me.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    non-refundable

    you about to hurt something up in here
    GA_ this is a heavy hitter
    and you knocked me out girl

    i have no words
    this is that ****


    <DSS>
     
  3. raheem

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    I'm forever in the midst
    of sun showers, pouring
    deep dark droplets of
    the nectar from your......(surprise)

    I still feel your heels press
    against the small
    of my back, making
    my nature .......:D

    so many dreams we lived
    in nights that had no ending
    so many mysteries
    we uncovered inside/out/moment-to-moments
    blending

    salty tears from eyelids tightly closed
    salty bodies clothed in pure ecstasy
    I listened for your heart to call

    & naked I stand
    sun showers
    cum rain on me

    r
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!!!

    U BOUT TO STRIP SOMETHING DOWN
    TOO HOT 2 HANDLE ........SUNSHYNE
    YA FLAMING LIGHT IS LIT AND LOOKS
    LIKE HE'S IT............WHOA!!:eek:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    This is So nice. I loved it. Your work is so full of SUNSHINE!

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA....

    Only you could lay him down like this:

    GottaHaveYourFineBlackAss
    broad-cast network

    Sista-gurl!!
    You are smokin' lethal today!!


    :D
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay Now....

    Can we cut on the A/C cause it is hella hot in here. Girl i'm am lovin this....you know what I'm about to do right. Send this right on ova to my baby!!!! ;)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Guys Are So Good To Me!


    Soja. dat's ryght! NON-refund-able Love!! which
    means... you ain't gettin' it back!! :) thanks for always
    bein' there!

    $$RICHNE$$. you keep on makin' me shyne!! :)

    CoCo. i appreciate the read & the reply! thank You!

    Hunter. MY sister!! i do my best! i thought that
    line was cute... glad you appreciated it too! thanks for
    the love!! :)

    Sha-Sha. :lol: gggggirl! gone and hook him up!!
    let me know what he says! thanks for the read!!
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raheem. mmm... mmm... & mmm-hmm! :)
    & that's all i can say... at the moment... howeva! i will
    definitely be getting back with you later, about this bit
    of sweet-ness you've left behind for me!! :wink:
     
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    I am about to bathe in the glow of yo' sunlight 'til I get sunburnt and I ain't moving 'til it happens! GA what YOU do is LOVE and you do it well...keep 'em coming..... I have a towel

    and a **** good imagination

    verb
     
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