Black Poetry : Ironic

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I used my sex as a weapon
    And in turn I had to barter my heart
    Tried to gain back a few pieces to
    play the rest of the game with bits and parts

    ......but I got played & It was checkmate
    Koncking me over like I was a chess game
    he told me "Don't catch no feelings"
    Though a few hours ago he was screamin my name

    Now I'm walking towards home ...
    trying so [email protected] hard not to cry
    I feel hurt and betrayed
    and I don't even know why....

    I choose to remain friends with him
    So why am I in tears????
    I was blubbering and sniffiling
    AS if he'd confirmed all my fears

    I have came to the conclusion
    That I am just not relationship material
    All the boys want the virgins
    though im not a **** with a venereal

    And on my walk of shame home,
    Who did you think I would never see?
    I saw my first love looking concerned
    Stopped in front of me.......

    Asking me was I OK?
    Through my tears, I tried to act tough
    Tried to tell him I was just fine
    And in a minture I was about to turn rough

    But I couldn't even do it...I just criedn
    And to my surprise he gave me a hug
    He felt so warm...the memories flooded in
    And it gave my heartstrings a tug...

    To me it's just so ironic....
    That the love I had for my first was through
    All the hate I had for him.........
    Yet he was the first one I cried to.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!!
    the game is tough
    can be rough
    we lose some and win some
    we play and get played
    a well lesson learn
    see no need to yearn
    first love to ya side
    in da heart dis reside
    sound like a ironic twist
    u know i'm lovin dis
    tyte hot deep scribe here u did it again !!!
    whoaaaaaaaaaa!!!
     
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    yes my sistah
    i feel your flow
    it is so much to life
    we all must know
    it is i guess
    as you said Ironic
    a turn in the path
    a walk on the road
    there is so much
    we live and grow
    and it is so wonderful
    near the end of the road
    to have a friend
    in the end
    very nice flow sistah
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich...:heart: your compliments always bring me up:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blue:heart:
     
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    Cindy, that is sumthing im hoping for as well...Im tired of all this hate in me:(...I just want a friend for real and he's cool so far .... i can let the pastbe the past:)
     
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    Just friends... SwtT. Just for now. Until you can really trust his heart and yours.
    :heart:
    You are growing... :)
    :wave:
    hey...
     
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    yes indeed ya heart is hurting
    the past is yesterday
    but the hope is tomorrow
    so move pass it and hold it wit hope
    and see how his heart float
    this will allow u to feel the realm
    sun shinning in yo direction
    let it in sistah let it in !!
    feeling truely the emotions being express here
     
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    this was a nice flow...
    feel the emotions...
     
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    SwtT, I have to say I'm really proud of you. You have grown so much over the last six months - like a meteor. Thanks for letting us watch you bloom, girl. You're a wonderful young lady.
     
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