Black Poetry : Invitation 2 Luv

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My Heart invites thee
    where da soul is pitted deep
    feelings cross emotion sweep
    where love never sleep
    behold i stand at thy feet
    an invitation surely to keep


    Cometh as da night filled brightly starz
    or upon da mellow of moonz
    cometh in da glist of rayz forth thy sun
    in his yellowish golden hallo
    cometh beloved in da twilight soft & gray
    it can be of nightingale or sunny as day

    O' love cometh where thy may
    upon da welcome of my hearts place
    where art thee O' loveth i call
    inviting u to our new start
    allow da purple redish maze carry u
    into these armz dat awaits so true

    My sweet beauty o' love
    da essence of ya nesting warmth
    is lifting my spirit on a dove
    cometh when my heart is in grief
    or when thy be merry
    cometh by faith of thy fate
    as i invite u to a total package

    Allow me to invite u
    allow me to rapturmize ya body
    cascade beyond nudity
    and see thee as are, forth my loveth
    thy eyez no not the story
    yet feel da moments of us in glory

    Ur welcome as the summer rain
    and the blossom of flowers
    beyond da Fallz of golden brown
    as we colormize in shades unknown
    or by da wintery snow haze so whity pure
    to spring us in da river of sail "cometh"

    An Invitation 2 my love , will u accept !?


    A Dyamondluv Production
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    Copyrights (c) 2007 Da $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't imagine a true love that would not accept this heartfelt invite. What a romantic write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let her cometh unto these awaiting armz watz thank u sweetie pie
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man can i just marry you? what a beautiful heartfelt piece!
     
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    I need to bottle up the magic you created with this piece and sell it on the market. I could make a fortune. Nicely done poet continue to let the pen flow.
     
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    this was beautiful
    very nice...
    shoot.. i wud accept..lol
    keep flowin wit da wind my bratha

    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awwwwww Nevar u sure can, set the date when we get married....lol

    let da liquid magic pour wide long and deep to every love i so seeth thankz a million
    surely if i could i would AHMOSE

    Really would u accept this invitation to a new beginning wow !
    thank u and come hold my hand baby girl as we walk the lane
    GhettoAmbition
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    You have one amazing pen. Everytime
    I think you can not write something more
    beautIful....You write it even more beautiful.
    Since you already have 2 RSVP's on this
    invitation I'm going to just sit back and
    savor it's every BEAUTIFUL WORD.


    Much Luv to you $$RICH$$:blowkiss:
     
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    don't sit back , but accept thy invitation and let me know
    feel ya pen in expression of it's invite.......Thank u my sweet QQn....@ 4EVERLUV
     
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    i see you haven't missed a beat, keep inkin' em

    Lyr1c
     
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