Black Poetry : Invisible

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  1. ~Provakativ~

    ~Provakativ~ Active Member MEMBER

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    I see you pass me by everyday,
    With your secret burdens and hardcore cliché
    In the shadows you hide, like a bird
    A word with broken wings
    Broken syllables that can’t fly

    I see you look my way and smile
    If only for a second
    Then you disappear back into the world again

    Your philosophy
    Monogamy
    Truly enchant me
    Embrace me
    And make me
    Want to get your name
    Even then I’ve known you since 2003 minus 5

    I see you and your invisibility
    I see how your philosophy is “I’m going to do me”
    And I see how you stand there and look at me..then look away as if nothing happened
    When you know that something ignited and made everything seem as if you were on ecstasy...

    You’re invisible in black light
    Your aura makes even the blackest night bright
    But you hide yourself in your burdens you lie....
    Invisibible to me...and the world’s eye

    I see you ! I see you invisible man with eyes that can’t lie
    With tears that don’t fall unless tribulations have been tried

    As they fall and become part of that collection of sorts
    I still see you invisible man and still love you in some sorts

    You just seem to be...seem to be......a part of me.....
    Though you try to hide in the shadows of my entity....
    Invisible I call thee, Invisible I love, Don’t be cruel to yourself...don’t be cruel to us.
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice poem, something i can relate to
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Invisible 2 others, but quite visible 2 U,
    It's a weakness of mine 2 act like I don't see what U do...
    Best believe you've been acknowledged by the brief smile on the face,
    Forgive me if it's not plainly recognized that your mind I embrace.
    Cuz all I want is someone 2 converse with,
    Spit verse with, whatever I feel like saying,
    my mouth is comfortable 2 disperse it.

    Feelin' this completely.

    Speak, cuz some brothers won't.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i feel dis one i most def know where ya taking dis
    flow on
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow
    feelin the vibe on this one
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, love this. specially the "disappearing back into the world" line.
     
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