Black Poetry : Invisible Tears

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  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Crying invisible tears
    because you're afraid to
    let anyone know what you're
    feeling.
    Not sure if the person claiming
    to have a shoulder is even on the
    same couch as you.
    Wandering around, talking to people
    who are just as lonely as you are.
    Contemplating death but @ the same
    time wanting to wake up and smell
    the coffee but @ the same time
    not knowing how.
    Contemplating running away but @ the
    same time wanting the closeness of someone
    you know, even if they are two
    rooms away.
    So contemplate this......
    I know what you're going through.
    and picture someone trying to be there
    for you and you won't let them.
    Just thought I'd let you know,
    I'm here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NADEA

    GLAD U R THERE AS I AM FOR U
    ONE LOVE TOO ANOTHER LOVE
    BY HEART AND SOUL
    FRIENDSHIP........
     
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    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    such a sweet peace Nadea
    what a wonderful friend
    they have in you

    thank you for this
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Girl,

    I'm feelin this like I said before,love your poetry most def.
    Desert Storm
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully expressed....

    What a blessing you are to your loved ones!
     
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    The Renaissance !!

    this reminds me of how my couch has no shoulders
    and my tears have only my hands to wipe them away.
    I'm glad you see that your work touches people.
    (touchpeople/touchmooses)
    { insidejoke }
     
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    nadea,

    your zone is like no other with this piece.
    i think there are a lot of women like you who are there
    when we don't realize it.
    you brought it home

    peace.
     
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    Nadea

    Yo im str8 up lovin this one hea mami... Im workin on somethin similar and when I saw this I was like whoa! it's madd tight!!!

    im there right now...

    It's all love!
    Reas
     
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    Hopefully the love
    We have will spread
    To one another
    So that we can wipe away
    Those Invisible Tears
     
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    this invisible tears i felt the emotion on this one flow on poet.
     
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