Black Poetry : Invisible Motherless Child

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  1. Queen_Nemesis

    Queen_Nemesis Member MEMBER

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    puke: as the fire in his eyes blazed and the screams were heard...as she was being branded with the red streaks across her sun-kissed skin...as she sat in her fetal position in the closet in fear...as she heard she was stupid,fat,and ugly...as she waiting in great anticipation for God to send her a savior...as she cussed and busted holes in the walls from frustration and hatred...as she swallowed every pill in the house she could possibly find...as she had nightmares seeing herself in her own coffin and family with eyes like coals crying hysterically...as backs down to every person she has had a confrontation with...as she thinks back to all her shoulda coulda wouldas and didn'ts...as she promises herself that she will strive to love herself...as she avoids the mirror not wanting to even have a glimpse at the scary young woman looking back at her...as she realizes money makes the world go round and stops loving everyone and everything...as she sees the man known as her father in his coffin...as she felt his hand and it felt like icy cold leather...as she wonders why she can't cry...as she discovers that you can't grieve over something or someone you never had...as she looks for sunshine through the cotton above the world...as she is smothered by evil...as she writes this poem...as she looking into the white waters of the sky...she wonders...will it ever be over????....
     
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    Queen,

    You throwin' down! Peace.
     
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    very nice flow love'd dis here
    yo pen sound sweet
     
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    WHOA! you sure came wit on this one:)
     
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    dang you bad!! you should post here more often.:)


    much love,
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    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!

    I'm speachless, very heart felt

    Shay
     
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    this depressed the hell outta me...but it was vibrant...go head...nice scribe.
     
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    thank you ladies and gentlemen i appriciate this
     
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