Black Poetry : invisible ink

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Giovanni, Mar 9, 2002.

  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for 9 months i sat inside you...the embryonic nuclei of a haiku...
    the tanka's first 3 lines...til' 31 contractions...birth me free flow...

    through your cervix...

    i suckled your prose through flows...nipples that nurtured me...poetically...

    and watch your rhymes...become spine and hip combinations...

    while rhythm's timin'...a watch dial on the back of your thighs...
    percussion confined to tight jeans...a cue ball...who's pendulum swing...
    breaks up bodega crews...like solids and stripes...

    or water molecules in meltin' ice...

    you break the mold...

    fold the earth in your footprints...

    shake the fruits from your poem-tree...fed me what was out of reach...

    i thank you...for the understanding...
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eeek: :eeek: Looka heah, looka heah :eeek: :eeek:

    U still da BOMB boiiii !! There's none other that can
    spit a prose out & turn it into a great "spit-shine" on some
    dull black leatha shoes - the way Giovanni do!!!

    :) (now where you been hidin' at boo?) :)

    N2
     
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    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you...

    i just been busy with school and everything.. tryna' transfer over to Howard University and complete my undergrad education there.. plus, my poems been comin' slow to me.. so that's why i haven't been postin' much.. but thank you N2urSoul.. you know it means alot to me to get a complement from you.. yousa sick sista' with a pen.. thanks again.. be easy..
     
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