Black Haiku : intro'in the 'buc’ii'

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    buc’ii is another poetic cousin
    to the haiku...like the sonku, vaniku and oku.
    it follows this format: (333232314)




    i asked u:
    have u can
    i? u smile
    and nod,
    yet u give
    me bones,
    ashes of
    what
    u were before.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where did it come from and it's creator ?

    where did it

    come from by
    whom create
    this type
    of art work
    format
    and founder
    by
    which it have came
    :qqb013:
     
  3. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo i'm the creator of it bruh RICH :qqb023:

     
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    wow !!!
    cool and i love the style what made u drop this and form such a beauty ?
     
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    U tell me
    Life changed U
    Beat out joy
    Nodding
    I said Oh
    I see
    You're depressed
    like
    Remnants of me
     
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    well bruh RICH i've always been in love with haiku's and tankas and decided to have my own personal one. I have many that i'll be introducing for peeps to see if they dig it.



    responses-
    sour and
    left over
    like road-
    kill. i've made
    my mind
    up...no more,
    no
    more broken love.