Black Poetry : Introduction (who i be)

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  1. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    I Be A young queen goddess
    Deep...
    looking past the masquerade that surrounds me
    staring into the essence that is truth
    I Be Me
    Transformin words into divine
    Fromin lyrical bars of gold that make my pages priceless
    Extractin mental mysteries from deep within
    You can’t possibly comprehend
    The way the words float
    From somewhere deep inside my mind
    And form art on this page
    Painting momentous sketches
    On a canvas that many have neglected
    Molding masterpieces out of memories
    Sculpting scenarios that seem strange to some ears
    But to others the beauty and magnificence appears
    Painting picturesque portraits
    That make you wish your imagination was as vivid as mine
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice to meet u and welcome to destee's!! :grouphug: :) :sand:
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    indeed you be you..
    nice flow..
    likes ya pen...flow on.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed dear goddess
    happy u are upon us in scribe
    let ya pen continue as we embrace u
    welcome !
     
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    Another sheep

    divine_1, I am dancing in your words for there is a message that involves more than your mind and heart have noticed. I do say it will be a pleasure to see more of your written words and how it will effect many readers of poetry. Also, welcome to our humble home.
     
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