Black Poetry : introducing you to my love.......

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  1. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams filled with...
    Trips to the park
    hand in hand
    on a semi sunny day
    sitting under an oak tree
    your head on my lap
    stroking your face...
    creating poems from scratch.

    Long, hot baths taken together…..
    you in front, lay'in against my breasts
    laughing at our 60 year old toes....
    reminiscing on how things came to be
    oh how funny, who would’ve thought
    other than GOD.

    I cry....
    tell you what life was like
    without you
    how I thought my father had forsaken me
    hung me out to dry
    to twist, struggle
    not knowing
    id identify you in the rinse
    it would all be a wash

    Levels of indescribable comfort
    revealing the true meaning of intimacy
    memorizing the lines on your palms
    growing familiar with your scent
    learning you
    loving you
    and the ways you show me love
    i never thought possible
    reaching through time zones
    seeing me without seeing me
    totally and completely
    blindly
    selflessly
    im bringing you home
    within me
    the object of your emotions
    the thought that makes you smile
    the beginning and end
    of your day
    everyday
    starting today……..

    Smile, its me introducing you to my love....
     
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    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! and a love i can learn to know.
    8th wonder u took it to a 10th spot
    on the real.....lovin it..sho ya love
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th....

    ahhh yes!!... done as only you
    can do it sistah Queen... this
    was exquisite!! ThatsReal...

    PeaceAlways...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww.... now ya got me blushin... Thanks sweetie...

    8th!!
     
  5. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just tryin to hang in there with ya Ms. GA!!

    thanks for the love....

    8th!!!
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you've gotta be kiddin'... ryght?!

    "tryin' to hang"???!!!

    girl please!!
    you hangin'!!
    believe dat!! :)

    OneLuv~
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW YOU KNOW, YOUR LIKE
    GODDESS OF LOVE
    MOTHER LOVE
    APHRODISIAC IN THE FLESH
    ALL THAT AND MORE.....IM JUST A SQUIRREL TRYING TO GET A NUT (NO PUN INTENDED)!!!
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL

    what you are is silly to death!! :lol:

    i thank you for the compliments...
    but you are certainly more talented
    than a squirrel tryin' to get a
    nut!! (LOL)... my passionately poetic sister!

    & dats dat!! :)
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    a beautiful love it is
    thank you for this 8th Wonder

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you destee

    thank you for the love destee.... deeply felt...

    8th!
     
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