Black Poetry : Introducing....her

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She has Captured my eye cuz her poetry is amazing,
    star-struck, mouth droppin, eye gazing.
    She is the Eternal Lover and eternal friend..
    all who have chatted with her says shes cool to no end

    Introducing....her..

    She tells me about The experience and Why I write about love
    The facts and situation she gives fit just like a glove.
    She a mentor of the family, a regular type of girl
    The one that everyone loves to be in their world.

    Introducing.....her....

    But The saddest line I cannot write ...because there are none.
    She shines on the forum like A Thousand suns!!!
    She told me that Timelessly always you love yourself and don't be no fool
    you gotta handle the bad situations . .........with unfathomed cool
    and that Nothing has Changed but the World around Us
    And we gotta learn to adapt sometimes and adjust
    Becuase everything can't go the way we want and plan
    We gotta go out sometimes and look upon the land.


    Introducing....her..

    I'm in the mood to write a poem a lot nowadays
    In the Twlight of extasythe peom starts to amaze
    And it's all because of her, one of the reasons I can back
    I was sitting down on the job, starting to slack
    She gives Letters of ConSoulation, she gives them from her heart
    Sh I just picked up a pen and decided to start
    I'm grateful for her presnce, matter o fact I'm glad...
    She told me Blow My mind poet...and I hope I just have...

    Introducing....Her.....
     
  2. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem, is this the Angelic Sage Tribute Poem?
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep...and thanks:)
     
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    Oh My Gaaawd Girl… :driveby: ​

    I have no idea what possessed you to write about me…
    but it must be a “Divine” force within you…because you’ve made my day…
    :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

    I’m sitting here like…Oh, SwtT dropped something new :read: ,
    …I know this is gonna be gooood…and I start reading and I’m like…hmmm,
    these underlined phrases…seem familiar…(silly me…lol)…
    and then my chin just dropped and I nearly hit the floor… :eek:

    YOU HAVE OFFICIALLY BLOWN MY MIND… :spin: :sand: :spin: :sand:

    Sister…you have my eternal gratitude and maaaad respect…WHOA…
    You put the biggest smile on my face…and believe…I haven’t smiled this big in a while…/
    Sister…*whew*…I’m truly speechless…/ I want to flow on this…thread
    but you’ve gotta let me get my composure…first :coffee:

    You are one sharp sister…and I love what you’ve done here…
    Ok…let me stop…I’m rambling out of shock…

    And to think you started this piece with the first piece…I ever wrote… “Captured”
    …and it’s my one year Anniversary too…. :cry: I think you’ve inspired me to write another piece…

    BIG HUGS…and MUCH, MUCH, MUCH, MUCH LOVE TO YOU…
    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:

    YOU HAVE OFFICIALLY BLOWN MY MIND… :driveby:

    Thank you...
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REEALLY NOW??? I did not know it was your anniversary......:devil:
    oh plz girl, you deserve all this and more:grouphug::grouphug:

    I jus WANTED you to know that you made my eternal respect becuase your peoms always touch me :):):):):):):):):)

    Yes...I Finally blew Sages mind!!!!
    :D:D:D

    :heart: ya girl and happy anniversary:)
     
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    ah, a most deserved tribute, and so beautifully written. *applause*
     
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    Beautiful tribute, poet. Tight :hot:


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so smooth and tyte love'd it
     
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    Wow...the way you incorporated sage's poetry in this piece, as well as your ode to her, this was wonderfully written SwtT. And sage, this was so well deserved, it's not just that you are talented, it's just because your poetry radiates you.
     
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    Aw, this is so sweet. I didn't even notice who it was until the end when it said you blow my mind poet. I was like this my sistah angelic. Aw, that was so tyte. Much luv to the both of yous. SwtT you got mad skillz.
     
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