Black Poetry : Introducing a new poet to the Board

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Oct 29, 2001.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she ask if i would post this piece I need y'all feed back....

    ************WHO AM I**************************

    I am that Queen
    with the stone face
    and bleeding heart
    some don't know how to take me
    others try to grasp and capture me
    for my power lies within
    was my third eye not open ?

    Or was i just blind
    to the signs
    that were revealed to me
    who am i
    you say ??

    I am
    that
    constantly evolving
    re-defining
    strong
    Black woman
    just when you thought
    it was safe
    and
    unlocked a closet
    there i go
    changing the lock
    and making new keys
    going uptempo
    without
    skip ping
    a
    beat..................by a dear poetess friend (Rene 2 sweet)


    let me hear y'all feed back sho her some love family !

    :heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIGHT FLOW, AND WELCOME!

    I feel ya, so deeply you could be talking about me!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop Likes.....Shining the Light on the new scribe..........Looking for some mo'......
     
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    Het $$$RICH$$$,

    is that brewedsosweet's piece? If it is tell her dnommo said stop being shy and join da fray...

    if not it's still a tight scribe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    family she be

    all smiles i love how she express her self as a true woman
    of beauty within her self ......yeap ! she's a Queen indeed
    i believe this will sho her true self and she flow
    coming soon to our Family !!..............Rene:heart: :kiss:
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see i knew it...she just be trying out stuff...

    imma hafta blow up her board now... :uzi:

    with mad love...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's all good MR. D

    she be on hit too ......i hope she join our family:toast:
     
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    Very nice.....

    This was a nice introduction of a poetess, I'm certainly impressed.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    THANKZ Epiphany

    she be a little shy but i'm working on her so she can flow
    from within .....thank u:heart:
     
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    this is a really nice peace your $$RICH$$NESS
    thanks for sharing her and it with us

    i'm sure if you're working on her it won't be long
    before we read more of her wonderful poetry :)
     
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